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Desmond

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Desmond 2 days ago
The final fixes have been made and the last two chapters have been revised in "The Natural" story. If you liked the story I encourage you to re-read the last two chapters. I think they are both better now - especially the ending which has been significantly expanded.

Unless one of you points out a glaring error there won't be any more changes on this one. Cassie and I are working on the sequal now which will pick up where "The Natural" left off and will feature a number of new characters and some new twists and turns - not to mentions Cassie's growing charms and curves. Thanks again for your support and your kind comments and likes on this story.
Desmond 2 days ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Ch 23 revised & expanded 1/18/16.) Comments welcome.
the natural
Desmond 2 days ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Ch 23 revised & expanded 1/18/16.) Comments welcome.
the natural
Desmond 4 days ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 21 on 1/16/17.) Comments welcome.
the natural
Desmond 5 days ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 16-20 on 1/15/17.) Comments welcome.
the natural
Desmond 1 week ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 11-15 on 1/13/17.) Comments welcome.
the natural
Desmond 1 week ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 11-13 on 1/13/17.) Comments welcome.
the natural
Desmond 2 weeks ago
Over 60,000 views and counting! Wow! Pep, Cassie, and I all thank you for your great response to "The Natural" story. I'm continuing to make small but important fixes in the text for a couple more days. If you haven't tried the story yet, give it a look. You just might like it.
Desmond 2 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 6 - 11 on 1/10/17.) Comments welcome.
the natural
Desmond 2 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 6 - 11 on 1/10/17.) Comments welcome.
the natural
Desmond 2 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 6 - 8 on 1/10/17.) Comments welcome. Hope you like
the natural
Desmond 2 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 6 on 1/10/17.) Comments welcome. Hope you like
the natural
Desmond 2 weeks ago
Some days are diamond, some days are stone. And they can turn on a dime.
Desmond 2 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 5 on 1/9/17.) Comments welcome. Hope you like
the natural
Desmond 2 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 4 on 1/7/17.) Comments welcome. Hope you like
the natural
Desmond 2 weeks ago
Looking for a conversation. Anyone interested? Kik: this.is.desmond
Desmond 2 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge, Cassie, are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 2 & 3 on 1/6/17.) Comments welcome. Hope you like
the natural
Desmond 2 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge Cassie are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 2 & 3 on 1/6/17.) Comments welcome. Hope you like it
the natural
Desmond 3 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge Cassie are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete. (Errors fixed in Ch 1 on 1/5/17.) Comments welcome. Hope you like it.
the natural
Desmond 3 weeks ago
new story created
Pep, new Feedee-in-Residence at the Succuent Sow BBQ, and her protoge Cassie are on a fast track to supersize curves -- and a dark fate. Deliciously twisted. No gore. Story complete 1/3/17 (except for corrections.) Comments always appreciated.
the natural
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