becky and her denial at work

chapter 1

Beckys first day at work she's around 150 lbs and she's 5ft8. She's a size 8 that are a little snug. Her job is being a waitress. She notices that through her first week she's sourronded by food. The temptation to eat was killing her. So a week later she began to start eating the food that was all around her. But they were small portions. Her pants get a little tighter she pays no mind at all. She was growing but her Fran's carried it well. Big boobs and a big butt and somewhat flat stomach. But that began to change. 3 weeks have gone by she's put on about 6lbs. Nothing noticeable but she's was gaining steadily. Her appetite grow and so did her waistline. She couldn't stop snacking on the food bite after bite she still craved more. Her pants getting even tighter but she thinks it's her butt getting to big. Little did she know it was her stomach growling also. Her work uniform was getting tight on her but her denial didn't help. She was oblivious that she put on about 12lbs in 2 months. The button on her pants were about to pop. She developed a bulge where her zipper for her pants are. Her co workers noticed that she was getting thicker but thought it looked good on her. So they would deny when Becky was like my pants are so tight I'm getting fat. And they be like no it's ur butt. So that didn't help either. She was pushing her size 8 pants to the limit she had hole where her thighs rubbed together but as before she didn't care. One morning as she's getting ready for work she tries to get her pants on. She realizes they are way too tight. She gets them up and sees her tummy once flat now pushing out. She couldn't believe it she was upset that she let herself get like this. But she gets the pants to button turns to the side and sees in the mirror that she has grown. But her big boobs were help hiding her expanding gut. She gets to work and she's hungry but can't eat a lot or her pants might burst. So she has to restrain her self from eating. But that can only last so long for her
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Left out of prior comment::

Also helpful would be character clarity. Was her accepting friend in the car male or female? The former has potential but wasn't really addressed.

Finally, your posted Chapter 7 is identical to your posted Chapter 6.
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The story can spread out (pun intended) beyond work but IMHO should still include the latter.

What you do need is proofreading ("phase" when you
meant "faze," for example) and paragraph breaks.

Also helpful would be character clarity. Wa
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Should I keep doing it about work
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mm have her keep eating more and gaining more but maybe she starts getting teased for it lol just an idea like you asked
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Any more ideas
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Djh11000 5 days
Please you are doing a great job
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Keep it up!
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Should I keep going
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Molly12345 2 weeks
lol it's my first time writing something like this
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Piggy_Girl 2 weeks
Can't wait to see more!
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Please continue this and make most of the weight go to her hips and butt!
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Molly12345 2 weeks
Worth continuing ?
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bbwluvr 2 weeks
A wonderful start. Keep going. You are a very descriptive writer!
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Piggy_Girl 2 weeks
Please!
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Molly12345 2 weeks
Tell me if I should continue