the new girl in town

the new girl in town

Intro -

I was never the most observant individual. I wasn't dumb by any means but there were certain things in the world that i never really grasped. The most apparent blind spot i had... Women. Never much of an outgoing guy while growing up, i seemed to miss out on some of the interactions that helped see past their fake smiles and cleavage. This blind spot had left me out to dry a few times in the past. It had also created the doubt i carried with me when debating on approaching a woman i found attractive to see if the feelings were mutual. Despite the reassurance from friends and past relationships, i didn't have the swagger and confidence most former college athletes seemed to possess. My personality was much more conservative than that, until I met Jane.

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Jane was the girl every guy dreams of having. Tall, lean, and a smile that could make your knees weak. She was very bubbly but at the same time confident with herself and not a person to mess with. She knew what she wanted and she knew how to get her way. I watched her from afar as she moved herself in to the apartment down the hall from me, noticing how each of her helpers would sneak glances at her as they walked past. She wasn't blind to the glances from them, nor from me it seemed as she waved happily when my gaze lingered a hair too long. Knowing she was well out of my league i shut the door quickly and retreated to my single bedroom apartment to do some cleaning.

It must have been no more than ten minutes before there was a knock on my door. Opening it slowly, i was greeted with a flash of a smile and a hair flip that i would soon learn to be a weakness of mine. She extended a hand and i shook it, noting her firm grip and confident gaze as she introduced herself. "Hi, I'm Jane. I saw you watching me move in and thought i would come down here to introduce myself while they finish up."

I stood there speechless for a moment as her voice was as sweet as one would imagine, a slight accent to it, but difficult to place. "Sorry, name's Mack, come in." I opened the door more to let her in, thankful i was somewhat of a neat-freak and the place was spotless. She seemed to notice as well when she looked around, letting out a long whistle and a slight chuckle. "You sure do keep this place clean, i may need to bring you 'round my place to get it looking like this."

Unsure of how to respond to the comment and lost in the soothing sound of her voice i mustered up a shrug and soft, "yea, sure." I felt as if she was looking around the place for something specific, but she never once asked as she inspected the living room. She commented on my Masters Degree on the wall and then the photo of my college football team as we hoisted a trophy after defeating a rival. She made her rounds and stopped right back where she started and gave me her signature smile once more. "It seems we've hit the jackpot Mack."

"Why is that?" I looked at her with a dumb expression, my blind spot and lack of expertise exposed.
With a flip of her hair and a look of confidence she said, "Two single, attractive, and fit professionals just so happen to live within 3 doors of one another. I'd say that's the jackpot honey. Now if you'd like to cash in on it, dinners in an hour and i'm one hell of a cook."
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vassond 2 months
This is amazing!!!! Muy caliente
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vegaaa 5 months
nice
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GummieTummy 5 months
...Jane needs to get her up n comins.

Well done.
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GummieTummy 5 months
Such a great story. I love how oblivious Mack was in the beginning. When he finally figured out what was going on, it was too late! He was already addicted to food; ruined! So good.

This story begs for a spin off (and so do I). Pretty please? Jane ne
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You have done a great job here. Looking forward to spin-off!
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DeviantMind 5 months
Thanks for the support. Like I said in the description, this was new for me to write about.

Was somewhat surprised I busted out that many chapters in less than a week.

Am currently toying with a "spin-off" of Lindsey and her "demons"
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hurgon 5 months
Great story, very well written and concluded!
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jackyle 5 months
WOW!
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Fantastic! I can't wait for more!
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Built4com4t 5 months
well done...absolutely
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hurgon 5 months
On tenterhooks!
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littleextra 5 months
Great work, very nicely done. Thanks for posting!
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DeviantMind 5 months
Thanks for the positive feedback, there is more to come (time permitting).

As for details, my idea was to limit them while he was in denial. Letting readers discover them as he does.
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otherland78 5 months
oh thanks for this lvely sexy story although i wished you would have described this episode with the doctor and his home fitness wokr out more ;-) as i would have loved to see him struggle over time more and more with them until jane and the doctor watch
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I love the interplay of your characters and his inner monologue. This is one of the best stories on here in recent years! Would love to read more (of this one or others!)!!!
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giantjay 5 months
This is really nicely written, and I can't wait to see how she will take charge and how big she will make him!
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billedmeup 5 months
If he turns the tables and insists that she eat more of her own cooking and starts gaining, that would also be fine fine by me. Great first five chapters, and hoping for more.
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billedmeup 5 months
I am loving this story. It is very well written and there is something about straight male weight gain that pushes my buttons. I love a story about a fit, sexy wife or girlfriend who fattens her unsuspecting male partner. If he turns the tables and insist
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hurgon 5 months
This is awesome! Jane's reactions are perfect, especially apologising for giving him a donut that wasn't filling enough! Haha. Looking forward to more!