Amanda's full life!

chapter 4

It would be wrong to describe Hilda Pzybylski as an evil woman. Neglected. Ignored. Overlooked. Yes all that and more. But truly evil? Not really. So it should come as no surprise that Hilda never set out to do Amanda any harm. She didn't HATE Amanda, she was just jealous of all the attention that seemed to come her way.

The thing to understand was that Hilda wasn't unattractive. She had a pretty, round face with just the slightest hint of a double chin. Her breasts were full and firm and her belly was ever so slightly round, about what you'd expect from a woman who stood around five feet six inches tall and weighed somewhere between one hundred fifty and one hundred sixty pounds. In fact, there were several men at the hospital who thought Hilda was quite something and tried to strike up some kind of a relationship with her. But she would have none of it. In her mind it was either Max or nobody.

Hilda knew she couldn't do anything to detract from Amanda's accomplishments. Her career was on an upward curve and likely to stay there. Amanda had a brilliant mind and nothing Hilda could do would change that fact. Which is why Hilda fixated on the one thing over which she COULD exert some degree of control, Amanda's weight.

While Max spent hour after hour coming up with new and delicious recipes for Amanda to enjoy, he was too shy to be the one who actually SERVED them to her. That task he left up to the one person on his staff he felt he could trust. That's right, Hilda.

Obviously, Hilda wasn't about to carve up Amanda's face or accidentally on purpose pour acid on it. For one thing, that was illegal. And Hilda wasn't about to spend the next twenty years in jail for the likes of Amanda Frazek. And that kind of violent behavior lacked subtlety and Hilda was nothing if she wasn't subtle. Ah, but one of Amanda's outstanding features was her supermodel figure, which is what Hilda spent all her time thinking about. She made it her mission to find a way to fatten Amanda Frazek up. Fortunately, Max inadvertently gave her the means to fatten Amanda up. After all, who was it who put Max's delicious meals in front of Amanda for her to enjoy? And if the low-cal recipes Max specialized in were slightly altered, who would be the wiser? Who indeed!!!
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Theswordsman 6 years
A good ending for Amanda's story.
Jazzman 6 years
Chapter 25.Bravo.Such great descriptive language and character development combined with Flawless pacing
Jazzman 6 years
Nice setup chapter with Hilly and Brad
Jazzman 6 years
Wonderful. I am going to love the growing of Hilly
Jazzman 6 years
Nice cliffhanger again with "Hilly".
Jazzman 6 years
I really like this story
Jazzman 6 years
Nice Cliffhanger
Jazzman 6 years
Another great chapter
Theswordsman 6 years
Mike reminds me a bit of myself
Jazzman 6 years
This is Terrific
Jazzman 6 years
Perfect Gain.Extreme yet we have seen it done.Although the next fifty should take longer.
Womansbellyl... 6 years
Been trying to stay away from numbers at first. Trying to factor in something outrageous but practical!
Jazzman 6 years
Would Love a scale visit soon.And perhaps a rundown of the gain so far in numbers. Amazing Story
Jazzman 6 years
Love this Story
Fatchance 6 years
Great Story!! More!!
Jazzman 6 years
Perfect. Such a Great Story .Amazing Pacing.
Jazzman 6 years
Yes! Plus I could never figure out how someone wouldn't notice chocolate powder on spaghetti. Lol But I have seen it in stories-and that is where they jump the shark with impatience.
This story is Wonderful.
Womansbellyl... 6 years
No weight gain powder! Too simple minded for a complex character like Hilda!!
Jazzman 6 years
Nice story.Pleading with you to not add weight gain powder to the foods.Butter.Olive Oil Avacado. Etc
Weight powder is always flavored and makes zero sense to me.But I have seen it used many times.
I like your characters. Very complex
Fatchance 6 years
well done, looking forward to more!
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