Chapter 13

As Heidi slowly got up, she wiped a bit of grease from her pouty lips and began waddling toward the living room. Soon enough, she had situated her huge body comfortably on the couch. No sooner had she reclined lazily on the couch, than Margarita came rushing in.

“So sorry, my dear, I double fried it!” she said, handing a platter of beef satay to Heidi.

Heidi grabbed the plate and when on talking.

“So, you’re looking good, my dear!” said Heidi, admiring Marisol’s trim form. “Bet the boys are after ya! Things are cool around here. Especially since they took my off that stupid diet.”

“Diet?” asked Marisol.

“You know, before I got my little farm and stuff.”

“Oh yeah, no I remember, that was a while back,” said Marisol.

“I totally missed this….” said Heidi, as she stuffed two pieces of greasy satay into her mouth.

“Great!” said Marisol. “Looks like we're all happy!”


Note: I have been struggling to find a place to go with this story, so have been content to let it end where it is. Needless to say, it could continue, I'm waiting for the inspiration to dream up a cool next Chapter. I have had folks suggest she gain more, I had written a version like that but eventually scraped it. Also it has been suggested that Heidi return home, setting up quite an interesting interaction between she and her parents. Again, still brainstorming but maybe someday the right idea will come. I have some other stories that are half finished too, again waiting for the right story development to come. Meanwhile I have been reading Onion88's stories over at Deviant Art. I love this author, a lot of you may too, if you're reading this. He will serve as an inspiration on any new stories. Hopefully, I will not rip him off too blatantly ;) He does a great job of painting the picture of wonderfully out of shape and idle young women who have totally give in to their hedonistic desires.



Note: I have been struggling to find a place to go with this story, so have been content to let it end where it is. Needless to say, it could continue, I'm waiting for the inspiration to dream up a cool next Chapter. I have had folks suggest she gain more, I had written a version like that but eventually scraped it. Also it has been suggested that Heidi return home, setting up quite an interesting interaction between she and her parents. Again, still brainstorming but maybe someday the right idea will come. I have some other stories that are half finished too, again waiting for the right story development to come. Meanwhile I have been reading Onion88's stories over at Deviant Art. I love this author, a lot of you may too, if you're reading this. He will serve as an inspiration on any new stories. Hopefully, I will not rip him off too blatantly ;) He does a great job of painting the picture of wonderfully out of shape and idle young women who have totally give in to their hedonistic desires.