Growing up, growing out

chapter 19 — so, how’s it gonna end?

What’s that smell? Mmmm, pancakes! My eyes blink wide open and I soak in the softly lit room… Even the closed curtains are no match for the sun. Lifting my body slowly, I stretch a little and start lumbering towards the kitchen.

‘Morning babe!’ pipes up Hans, cute as fuck in the nud… well, he’s wearing an apron, but that’s it. Butt naked!

I walk up behind him and reach my arms around, nuzzling my face in between his shoulder blades. Mmmm.

‘Morning.’ I say, purring deeply, ‘You made breakfast for me?’

‘For us, hehe. I snuck out to the supermarket for fresh strawberries and bananas… and flour, and sugar, and lemon, and maple syrup, and…’

‘Alright, alright, I geddit! We gotta stock up the pantry… how much do I owe ya?’

‘My shout, for the housewarming. Plus I’m gonna be living with you soon enough anyways… and I gotta cook with SOMEthing!’

Hans turns around and gives me a big kiss. Mmm, those soft, sweet, delicious lips. I squeeze another hug out of him.

We sit down and eat together. He sliced the bananas and strawberries and cooked them into each pancake, caramelising the sugars within. Coating with the maple syrup, it’s fucking delicious.

Hans only has two pancakes, whilst I’ve eaten over 6 already.

‘So Hans, you still sticking to that diet, huh?’ I ask.

‘Aww, I dunno. Like I said last night, I’m a gainer… but I dunno… What do you think? Should I muscle gain, or just let myself go full hog?’ he asks.

Hmm. Well, I fucking loved the fat Hans with the man-boobs and soft doughy belly… and I never got to feel him when he was like that. But then again, now that I’m a fat hog now, I really enjoyed the contrast when we had sex last night… his firm, slim body sinking into my soft fatness… Both are good versions of Hans.

‘I gotta say Hans, it’s your body, and I fucking love you either way. I don’t own you, I don’t want to control you with my preferences.’

And it’s true. He’s gotta do what he really wants, and I don’t want to decide the body he has to live in every day. Hans gives a crooked smile at me and looks down at the stack of pancakes sitting between us.

‘I guess it’s really up to me, huh?’ he goes. ‘You know what? Gimme some time to think about it…’

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So, how’s it gonna end?

A) Hans says ‘I can’t deny it, the contrast of my disciplined muscular body against your uncontrollable obesity… fuck that turns me on… That’s what I want. For me, and for us.’ [Proceed to Chapter 20]

B) Hans says ‘I’m sick and tired of starving myself all the time, I fucking love food… I’m an apprentice chef for fuck’s sake! And you know what? I miss being fat.’ Then he grabs three more pancakes, flooding them with maple syrup and stuffing one into his mouth. [Skip to Chapter 21]
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Miam14 5 years
Oui s il te plai ecrit de nouveaux chapitre j adord l histoire je l ais lut 2 fois
Miam14 5 years
Genial continue cette histoire
GayVeganAbroad 6 years
2017-11-28

Hi everyone! It’s been a while, aye? Fantasy Feeder limits comments 255 characters, so I'll spread this message over 7 posts.

This story was my first sincere attempt at writing fiction, and looking back, I can see there are many flaws…
GayVeganAbroad 2 years
(1) Joe's changing body was meant to be described accurately given weight changes over a specified time. It didn't. Now I have a better understanding of body shapes per BMI levels, and will fix this.
GayVeganAbroad 2 years
(2) Joe's weight gain was intended to be realistic over given time periods, but sometimes was too slow, other times was too fast. The story needs amending for this too.
GayVeganAbroad 2 years
(3) The story is too long for fast erotica. It became an erotic drama novel. It's a bit too much. Maybe I'll tighten or remove some chapters. Or maybe not. But the story exceeded its intended length.
GayVeganAbroad 2 years
(4) Probably many grammatical errors I need to correct.

Despite these flaws, you guys, the community, seemed to enjoy my story regardless, and I am humbled by this.
GayVeganAbroad 2 years
Thank you for your support!

Given these flaws, when I complete the novel, I'll create an abridged adaptation for fast-erotica lovers. You guys deserve it, given your support and patience.
GayVeganAbroad 2 years
Now that I'm able to accommodate writing into my lifestyle again, I'll return to finishing this story. Let me know if you're still interested, and I'll write a chapter real soon after!
GayVeganAbroad 2 years
Thank you all, once more, for your ongoing support!

~ JacKyle
Dragunzar 12 years
Please add moar? ill pay you in cookies =]
Feedfig 12 years
This is still beyond amazing. I really hope you find the motivation and time to finish it. I don't care so much about the Renee, Jess, Angus love trinagle thing, but I definitely need to know what happened to Brad. I really wanted him and Joe together! Please continue this masterpiece!
Daver58 12 years
and then after weeks and weeks of constant gorging, his Mom makes him get out of his room and get a job ….at a buffet! Then his feeder, finally notices him….!
Daver58 12 years
…or, being embarr***ed at the party he turns to food and totally loses himself in a m***ive orgy of fattening food!
GayVeganAbroad 12 years
Funny you say that... I did plan for Joe to get a job at a fast food outlet.
Daver58 12 years
gasps for breath…cough, cough! story…like…..like wa….water!! WATER, WATER! Pretty please??? :-)
GayVeganAbroad 12 years
Been busy @ work... playing a cat-and-mouse game of catch-up. I've finally got to the point of being a fortnight ahead of my paperwork (take that suckers!) so I no longer need to have late nights doing paper work. Also, lack of motivation has led to writers block, and therefore no extra chapters smiley Maybe send me a supportive PM and my motivation might come back XD
Fatfiction 12 years
Been a few days....
GayVeganAbroad 13 years
Thankyou! Well, I've just got an iPad, so I should be able to get back into story writing again smiley I'll have some new chapters written up and posted in a few days time smiley
Daver58 13 years
um.....bated
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