Shit my father says... its a hoot

um i can eat 6 slices of an 18 inch pizza.. i did tonight and it hurts to move

There a couple of stories on here where writers ask for ideas for future chapters. That's a double edged sword. you might get stupid feedback that doesnt fit in the story Or it might be discouraging if no one weighs in with ideas.

It seems to me that stories that have sudden extreme weight gain end too soon. some in one chapter. The more realistic the gains the longer and more interesting it flows. and it can be drawn out longer.

There are many situations you can place the characters. Keep it real. and not too extreme. and once someone is immobile the story is just about over.

I really look forward to your story.

i say go slow and keep it interesting. there are a lot of great stories on here and they take their time and deal with details and write well. As long as its interesting keep going.
its hard to keep from writing into a corner.
you might read other stories of a similar lengh as your and see what they did.
I look forward to reading!!

Hi,
For me it is a fantasy that I like to think about before I go to sleep.
In my reality (now) i have to stay at a mobile weight and me able to move around.
I am kind of sub so the idea of being made to grow like this is a T/O.
Its just not pratical.