Story ideas and starts

  By Nok

chapter 2

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groundhog's day parodies

1. Where the main character is a man trapped in the same day over and over again, where the only thing that changes is his love-interest's weight. I can think of lots of details, but I don't know the best ones.
a. Perhaps the key to breaking the spell is that he has to confess his desires to feed her and see her get fatter.
b. Perhaps as she gains she becomes more and more a feedee
c. Perhaps he has to fatten her to his ideal size
d. Perhaps he has to fall in love with her, but he's only attracted to fat women. as the story progesses, he becomes more and more into her, both from getting to know her, and as her weight climbs
e. etc

2. Where the main character is a woman, and the only thing that changes day to day is her weight increase
a. Perhaps until she confesses her desires.
b. perhaps just a conventional parody

3. Where a couple are the main characters, and both of them experience the effect, but they are the only ones in the world that do.
a. good reason to gain: intense boredom lol. Plus, they stop going to work after the first week.
b. Could combine with the 'he loses and becomes fit, she gains and become fat' idea
c. could be that not only are their bodies the only things that change day to day, but also that as they change everyone else accepts it as normal and expected, as if reality itself has been changed. For instance, late in the story the woman is over 300 pounds, and her sister is recalling how she has been heavy since jr. high or something


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'Black Snake Moan' weight gain parody
XD


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a woman who only goes on dates wearing a fat suit. A feedee and fat girl at heart, she wants a man who wants a woman that big, but also one that wants her for her and not just her body. It's a hard compromise.


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girl who is so repressed (transitive) about her instincts towards being a feedee, that she becomes an anorexic
psychological focus, both on repression and the eventual joy of healing, acceptance, love, and release


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an angel falls to earth and discovers food

she comes to help a man through a tragedy, but falls in loves with him and his diner's cooking. Luckily, this also proves the way to heal her charge's heart.


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man who punishes himself for his impulses/instincts to feederism and inner joy and satisfaction with women gaining weight, compulsion to feeding?, by becoming the best personal trainer and workout instructor he can be, empathetic yet motivating, driving yet understanding, blahblahblah.
thin beautiful girl tracks him donwn from an online feeding site, enrolls in his classes, and begins teasing him by eating. maybe moves in with him and gets fat, or maybe just gets fat in fromnt of him to drive him crazy and try and seduce him (? which of course she finally does, either as the climax of the story or act 1)

Reminds me a little of Dr.Feeder/TR's "The Sculptor"


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A mom feeds her teenage daughter to make her gain weight and be less popular so she'll do better in school and not get knocked up like she did. She arrives home each day and has to sit down to a big meal and finish it all, then do her homework. Then she is allowed some very sedentary free time before she is served her dinner in bed, always a spread of very tasty and very rich foods that her momma sits with her and spoon feeds into her mouth, checking her fullness with a tape around her belly and only stopping when she is sure she's good and stuffed. Then a sleeping tablet and sleep.
Everyday for months she is fed like this, all her sports must of course be dropped at the beginning. Slowly she gains weight and loses popularity, and isn't allowed to tell anyone what is going on. She just has to go to school every day forced to get slowly fatter. Of course, the smartest and most popular guy in school, captain of the football team, is a chubby chaser, and while he wasn't attracted to her before, finding her shallow, as she becomes shier, more insecure, and yet much more interesting from studying and research and learning becoming one of her only outlets, as well as much nicer and more empathetic, he tries to date her many times and falls in love with her over the course of the only time they can find together, lunches in the many more secluded areas of the school, talking and joking and later flirting and kissing. Eventually they marry and she gets into a very good college on a full ride and becomes a lawyer, her mother's goal and dream, though ironically she of course never speaks to her mother again.
maybe tell the story from his point of view, first person limited

[Or...]
the alternative of course is that the weight gain makes her look much more like an adult woman, and she actually gets hit on much more by men, and before she is 18 gets knocked up BECAUSE of her mother's stuffing her and making her fat. For that taste of irony.


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(set in the future, but probably the near future)
Have you put on some weight sweetie?
Yah. Thanks for noticing girl! Pete and I are going to try to get pregnant.
Oh terrific sweetheart. Youre going to be such a great mommy. So how much does the doctor say youll have to gain?
He says I should be over 220 before I go off Contro, so I've got quite a ways.
You've made a good start though sweetie. Look at that little tummy. So how much have you gained so far.
Well, I started around 120, so about 15 pounds--
Freshman 15
--but I hear the first 15 are always the easiest, so I'm a little worried. Its been 2 months. At this rate it'll be next year before we can even start trying to really get pregnant.
Oh sweetheart, Im so sorry. But cheer up, Im sure it will get easier. Hey, (conspiratorially) so how is pete liking it?
Well, I don't know...
You mean you haven't talked to him about it. You know he told my hubbie he likes... well... just talk to him about it sweetie. Maybe youll find a little extra motivation...


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"I want to know you are, what I'm doing here and I want to know now!"

"In accordance with the appetites of the dark one, salacious ruler of this domain, we the holy legions proffer up this sacrifice to slake the vile depraved thirstings of the unspeakable one." (Red Dwarf! lolol)

He was beautiful, a perfect Adonis of men, but for his giant white golden wings, and his light red-purple irises, tinged and almost flicking with subtle branching streaks of flashing gold.

He brought a large, fat red berry to her mouth with just the smallest of smiles

He fed her for months. sometimes he was almost kind, but other times he was brutal, his skin so red it was almost black, every touch an electric shock. When she displeased him, she might feel the lashing of dozens of whips on her stomach or face or her quickly burgeoning backside (from merely one glance?), but no mark ever marred her skin, save for a reddening of the parts most afflicted as her body responded to pain from wounds it couldn't know weren't real

He would often fill her with the most succulent treats imaginable, but if she didn't eat enough, or if she made him wrathful, it might not be so. Once he forced her to consume what smelled and tasted like garbage for three days and nights.

But when she was good, and ate as she was fed, the tastes might be made to bring her even to the brink of ecstasy. and if she pleased him especially, such as by truly enjoying being fed or full or fattening sexually, every bite might become as an orgasm, and wave after wave of climaxes for days on end would rock her to her very soul as he fed her and fucked her, until at length she would remember no more, but awaken with a feeling of total wellbeing few mortals ever knew.

And so her entire soul was colored and warped to him, to his will. Her body responded to his whims with fervor and her will was crushed totally and so his replaced it.


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instead of convincing a skinny girl to gain for some commercial enterprise, instead use a fat girl
"but I don't want to gain weight"
"but you won't really. we will be helping you do something you've never been able to before, losing from your 185/215 down to 125. All that you will have to do to complete your contract is gain it back"
great (destructive?) psychological manipulation in discussion of lacking self will, of the best parts of 'Diet to Gain', of forcing her to get fat, back to her real body, the body she made and 'should' now be grateful she is being paid for, 'much more than any other fat girl ever gets', 'more than she deserves', etc etc.

OR, after losing the weight she is informed that her contract actually was tricky, and the weight loss is considered payment. the only way to void the contract, and thus get paid the original fee, is to gain it back / undergo their treatment/clinic for regaining (something that for some reason they have to have in the contract, mandated assistance, or perhaps, psychological-motivation-wise, some sexual sadism on the part of the owner). XD that's fucking terrible


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Girl laughs at dog who gets too fat for her collar and has to have it cut off. Owner takes offense and takes revenge



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Comments appreciated!!!
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Nok 5 years
Thanks Some Tormented FA! I hope so too
XD
FatAdvocateFA 5 years
All of these are fantastic. Hopefully someone picks them up and realises them. I can't unfortunately, because I've got five different projects lined up.
Nok 5 years
-all turn out good enough to be worth reading. Plus, I also have a bunch of other old stories I haven't edited or posted yet either, and a couple more idea lists. Life comes first, se le vie
Nok 5 years
Thanks waxer! Yah, I wish I had the time or imagination to write all these, but I'm seriously not that interesting lol. That's kinda the reason for the list on DA, hoping some might get adopted. No way I can write 300(ish) more wg stories and have them al
Waxer 5 years
A lot of these seem pretty good to me. But in my if you want some outside opinion on what to write, just pick the one you find the most interesting. IE not just the one you think about while writing but the one that comes to mind while your bored driving