partyinmytummy:
Omg I am trying to think of that stuffing scene from a movie... but I can never remember. ALSO does anybody remember that add that was on like TBS or something, some guy stuffing himself and then EXPLODING
So maybe you're thinking of Matilda? Maybe not... Either way good scene.
4 years
I would read your story.
4 years
I sort of feel like the story Hedonism by UK lionheart is a pretty good one. It is similar because the main character does not know what is really going on.
8 years
I think I'll just message you.
8 years
I that you go to the Deviant Art Website and look up The-Id. He has posted works such as The Senator's Daughter, One Cake Over the Line, and (a true classic in my opinion) the Tara series. I have a hunch he would be willing to read over your stuff.
I personally have posted (here on Fantasy Feeder) The Woman in the Emerald Scarf -- which is still in progress. I commonly comment on other peoples stories, and would be happy to proofread yours to give suggestions. Feel free to message me.
8 years
