intro. + para.1



It was hard to take it all in, but it was there right in front of me. I couldn't deny it, but I only had one question. Why?

-1 day earlier-
Ella and I were a perfect couple we both loved each other for our personalities and not just our bodies,
We had been dating for 1 1/2 years, and I knew her pretty well. So when she started acting strange I noticed it really quickly. "Elllllaaaaa" I called out "Caaaaaammmmm" she replied "come here" I heard a thud and an ow "are you alright" I called out worried "yep just getting out of bed" when she arrived I asked her what was bothering her "nufin!" She slurred "Ella we've been dating for over a year and a half I know when something is up", then I remembered that she went to a party yesterday with one of her friends while I was out of town "Ella did you make out with another guy while you were drunk? It's ok if you did because I know what you're like when you're drunk, and it's impossible for you to not get drunk at a party" "sooorrrta" she replied "it's ok" pulling her into a reassuring hug "because I know you will always stay with me" "yeasssss" I looked at her, she looked really tired so I just let her slump back to her room.


While I was tapping away at my keyboard working I saw Ella phone light up I ignored it as it was none of my business, but a few minuets later it buzzed again I knew this was going to happen again so I picked up her phone to put it on "do not disturb" when I noticed the text. It had come through from someone called "Telstra" but this wasn't a Telstra text as it read "hey if you ain't busy we can have some more fun tonight cuz I got some extra rough stuff we can play around with 👅😈"
It was hard to take it all in, but it was there right in front of me. I couldn't deny it, but I only had one question. Why? I got so angry! But I soon calmed down I knew how I was going to get my revenge on her, I was still so heart broken that she would do this to me, I thought things were going well but I guess I was wrong! I called out saying that I was just going to the shops for a bit, when I didn't hear a reply, I presumed she had fallen asleep.

Sorry for the slow start the first few paragraphs don't have much action ;) but it's get better trust me

(Since it's slow ive released the first two paragraphs(intro and para.1) together)
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Fishy fries 5 months
YAY we just hit 10000 views!!
Fishy fries 8 months
My first story that I put up on this website was doing good at getting people to view it but this one has just exploded and has now got more and I expect that this will get much more likes as more people seem to be enjoying this one

Glad you all do smiley
Fishy fries 8 months
Iím kinda suprised how many people are liking this so far because Iíve been reading stories on here for ages and only just made an account myself so I can start publishing my own ideas and stories

Thx guys
chrisart 8 months
This is a good start. keep going!