Chapter 5 - a talk with jack
Thank you guys for the feedback! I'll go around editing the story after a while, but I just want to let everyone know that I'm going to be taking a break from ff for a while. Probably like a month, or something since I'm really busy! Anyways, enjoy the chapter!------------------------------------The twins were having dinner; Max was stuffing his face with his winning hot dogs, and chugged down some beer, while Sam just ate the salad, and a little bit of some chicken strips.
"Why aren't you eating these hot dogs? They're delicious!" Max yelled.
"They're fattening. I'm ok with my salad," Sam replied.
"Of course you are. You never have any fun with food. Who cares! It's just a little fat."
"Just a little fat?" Sam asked. He grabbed the fat that emerged out of his shirt a while ago. "This isn't a little fat Max. You're huge!"
Max ignored Sam and continued to stuff his face. Sam left the room, and continued his training. Sam already got his abs back from all his training, but Max still stuffed his face.
After Max finished dinner, he still was a bit hungry. He went inside the kitchen and tried to find some extra food. He looked inside the fridge and saw two giant cakes. Max grabbed the cakes and headed back to the dining room to eat it all.
Just about when he was going to finish his cake, Jack came in and started to talk with Max.
"Max, my boy, how are you?" He said.
"Good Dad," Max replied with a stuffed mouth.
"Listen, Max, I need to talk to you for a second. Just a couple of blocks from here, there is a food competition going on and I need to compete in it. The winner gets to own the warehouse that the competition takes place in, and I think i can move restaurant in that location. Will you help me Max? I know you were just in a burger eating competition, but can you do this for your old man?"
"Sure Dad," Max said with a smile. "As long as I'll eat delicious food, I'm okay with anything!" He just finished the final cake.
"Thank you so much Max!" Jack hugged his son. "I'm going to hire a trainer for the contest. She'll probably meet you tomorrow and get you warmed up! The contest is going to in three days! So this Saturday! I hope your're ready for the training son!" Jack said as he left the room.
Max smiled, as he threw cake boxes away. He grabbed a bag of chips for when he got hungry at night, and went to his room.
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