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Got back into writing fetish...tips welcome

Just got back to writing fetish themed stories due to a request from a friend. Bear in mind that English is my thrid language smiley Any tips and suggestions are welcome. Just the beginning but the idea is for it to be an ongoing concept/story.

It's on wattpad now but if that's against the rules I can repost here.

wattpad.com/story/408688278-ophelia%27s-indulgence
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