Altough I only posted one story here, I got some 5 or 6 in the works. I usually like to include some action and peril because I think it helps keep readers engaged.
One is about some astronauts that land in a planet with some fattening effect and environment. A restaurant ran by some mysterious people where people who enter the vip area don't really want to leave. Some vacations where the girl of your dreams might be leading you into a trap, but will she have the courage to really turn in tho her bosses?
So there's always some sort of high stakes, and you can't leave it too obvious if escape will be achieved or not. A good way to do it is with a partial escape either by having consequences or simply by not having all characters making it
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