Letters And Numbers:
Thanks everyone for the honest feedback, on the story and on the format of a monthly story club/book club. Trying something new!
I think there should be better guidelines. Positive feedback only tends to backfire. I'm not saying people should be cruel or malicious. But I've seen time and time again where positive feedback only leads to people policing other's criticism in ways that prevent growth.
I also think there should be clearly guidelines on what stories should be reviewed. And I'm not just talking about "Feederism 101".
For example, I have a story on here about a dominant feedee queen with a harem of beautiful men. As proud as I am with that story, I know it will not appeal to certain audiences.
If you do decide to include darker, edgier, or more graphic stories, you need to make certain to post content warnings.
