Story authors

What would you think of a story where a young woman who is overly obsessed with working out and eating salad



becomes a roly poly over pampered cheesecake of a woman with a massive sweet tooth and is usually a couch potato but sometimes likes being a cheerleader type by doing some cheerleading dances and aerobic exercise


and she ends up getting a hot hunky boyfriend

There are lots of stories like that. I don’t find them super interesting usually, because there usually isn’t a plot besides that, but they seem to be popular.

It's one of the most common feedist stories. Not a fan because how they treat women. They women are usually written as bad people who become good only after getting fat. They are social outcast, but that's okay! There's a conventionally attractive male feeder around to spoil them like a princess.

And when the character is popular because she's actually nice? The story spits on her until she finds a super hot male feeder as a reward for suffering.

Then there's the ways the women tend to treat each other. Women do not support other women unless they are both fat. If they are skinny, they are catty, mean, and happy for the popular woman's downfall.

If you write a story like this, it would be nice to see women treated like people and then men to be decent.

This is more of a concept than a story. And while the concept is common, it's up to you as the author to string the parts together and execute it well. When approaching this project, ask yourself:

-What is the catalyst to your protagonist's weight gain? Does it start accidental and become something she enjoys? Or maybe she sees other women enjoying their indulgent lifestyles and intentionally decides to give it a try?

-How does the boyfriend factor into this? How do they meet? What is their initial dynamic, and will that change?

-What conflicts potentially await your protagonist and her love interest, and how can they be turned into compelling scenes?

I wrote a story along these lines. "Gain to Empathize" a mean personal trainer gets fired, her reputation in the local fitness community prevents her getting a job in that industry again. She takes a job in a bakery and balloons. She becomes a happy fatty.

And it, like everyone of Ned's stories, is great!!!!

Thank you for your kind comment!