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Thanks - I have uploaded the first few chapters on DeviantArt. Feedback would be appreciated/

I read the first chapter and if you want my honest feedback, I think it definitely crosses the line we talked about here. I am not comfortable reading more of it, sorry.

OK, so...that was not what I expected.

I'm with L&N on this one; I'm not comfortable with a child protagonist at the center of a sabotage plot.

I feel like this breaks some law somewhere. And if this is you not sexualizing a minor, I'd hate to see what you classify as sexualizing a minor.

All the ick. My soul needs to be scrubbed with sandpaper and I have the sudden desire to go to church.