try a thesaurus...seriously

www.thesaurus.com/browse/fat

beyond simple synonyms for fat and round and soft and heavy, etc. better to explore metaphors...use them _judiciously_ to paint pictures in your reader's head...like: her breasts were soft as ripe peaches, or her body was like liquid butter encased in a smooth silken skin, or his belly floated over me like a swollen full moon. :-)

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in many cases the chapter introductions are critical to each chapter...please replace them or include them in the body of the story.

many of my stories no longer make sense as each intro was a segue into the chapter.

please fix por favor!

whatever you write i'm sure is going to be amazing...keep trying please.

worst case you may have to somehow abandon the phone limited interface.

or one of us regulars can upload it for you, shinobi certainly could, as could i...just need the story emailed and the pic you want for the icon.

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ffancy has it right...everybody wins.

btw clock is ticking ladies...tick tock tick tock :-)

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btw you're on...stay tuned

and since you will win, what's second prize :-)

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sure...except YOU'LL win :-)

valentines is a perfect theme

yes...MAKE that slipper fit

i do the same, composing in word.

trick is to clear all the formatting in word (if you haven't already), then go back and make sure there are only double returns between paragraphs.

i prefer double returns rather than single returns and paragraph indents for readability.

use your word counter (or rough guess by counting word pages) to break your stories into 10k or less chapters, titling them ch 1, ch 2, etc. in word first so you can keep track.

then cut and paste "chapter" by chapter.

like anything, alls you got to be is a % or two smarter than your tools