I think part of the trick is to "hook" the reader from the beginning - if you start out with characters that raise people's interest, then you have some leverage to give them background as you go by.
that...and descriptive detail that can paint images in a reader's mind. done correctly a well written story can generate acute physical sensations that sometimes (i've been told) are more intense than in real life.
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try a thesaurus...seriously
www.thesaurus.com/browse/fatbeyond simple synonyms for fat and round and soft and heavy, etc. better to explore metaphors...use them _judiciously_ to paint pictures in your reader's head...like: her breasts were soft as ripe peaches, or her body was like liquid butter encased in a smooth silken skin, or his belly floated over me like a swollen full moon. :-)
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in many cases the chapter introductions are critical to each chapter...please replace them or include them in the body of the story.
many of my stories no longer make sense as each intro was a segue into the chapter.
please fix por favor!
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whatever you write i'm sure is going to be amazing...keep trying please.
worst case you may have to somehow abandon the phone limited interface.
or one of us regulars can upload it for you, shinobi certainly could, as could i...just need the story emailed and the pic you want for the icon.
b
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ffancy has it right...everybody wins.
btw clock is ticking ladies...tick tock tick tock :-)
b
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btw you're on...stay tuned
and since you will win, what's second prize :-)
b
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sure...except YOU'LL win :-)
valentines is a perfect theme
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winterstocking wrote:
I will MAKE people like what I like, darnit.
yes...MAKE that slipper fit
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