Feeling out of control and conflicted.

If the issue is more the obsessive/obtrusive thoughts than the actual weight issues, talk therapy is always a healthy thing to try out. It’s easier than ever to talk to someone, it can even be chat/text based. Always nice to get a little tune-up for the feelings if you can.
1 year

Big chapter dump or space it out?

Feeder862:
This is a very interesting question and one that I had posted to the forum a couple of years ago. The consensus back then appeared to be that people preferred a serialised posting schedule.

Having written many, many stories for FF, I can say that I have always taken the approach of completing the story in its entirity before I even begin to post the first chapter on here. That way, I can feed things in from Chapter One and know exactly where it is going. Everyone who reads my stories and invests time in them will know that they will always be completed. Around half way through the story, I often say in the comments section exactly how many chapters there will be once it is all posted. I think readers quite appreciate this and it encourages them to persevere.

Although a lot of peole complain about the chapter formatting of fiction on FF, I can say with absolute certainty that it improves my stories, allowing me to create a focus for each chapter and avoid aimless rambling. Once the story has been written, I will start breaking it up into chapters and embellishing it with the FF chapter format in mind; adding cliffhangers as needed. I also find that this encourages more comments on the stories, as readers discuss and hypothesise on where the story is going, keeping it higher up on the story section page (a constant battle on this site).

I think the serialised format is preferred for a number of reasons, as have already been noted here. When people click on your new story, they will immediately see how many chapters are in it. A large number puts people off from starting, so beginning small is key. Then again, too few chapters and people won't be interested either. I tend to post a flurry of chapters at the start and then feed in the rest day by day.

I have mentioned it before, but I would love for FF to introduce a system whereby we could schedule story updates so that we could upload story chapters to go live at a certain time each day. As someone has already mentioned, life happens, and it's hard to come back each day to keep uploading chapters.

I hope this helps. Best of luck with posting your stories on here. Despite the often lack of engagement from the readers on here, the story section is widely read and always appreciated.


This definitely helps and I think I will do it this way. I dumped enough over the first few weeks to give people a good bite, now I’ll post one ~2,000 word chapter a week. That will take me into May with what I already have written, and plenty of time to finish it and edit.
1 year

Big chapter dump or space it out?

FatAdvocateFA:
You never know. The idea of doing an ARG has never occurred to me, but it sounds like an impressive idea. Who knows if it would work -- but perhaps it's worth a shot.


I started putting some images in my Photos section. Just AI generated stuff with quotes from my story, but it’s fun to do at least. I have too much free time I guess 😅
1 year

Why is the “combined” premium pack more expensive than buying the two individually?

FF Team:
Hi,

The discounts are given based on duration not combined features. So there are discount, but this is for 3 months and 12 months subscriptions.

Having a combined upgrade makes it easier for users to manage one subscription, rather than having two. The combined upgrade was introduced for this reason, not to introduce further discounts.

I will say that upgrades are likely to be reviewed soon. So we can always consider this going forwards, but this will be the site owners decision.

Hope this helps,
c00kie
FF Team


Maybe you could make it 1 cent cheaper! 😅
1 year

Why is the “combined” premium pack more expensive than buying the two individually?

Ok, so it’s only more expensive by $0.01, but shouldn’t there be a discount? Or at least cost the same amount, but usually bundle packs come with a discount.

Sorry if this is old news, I went back several pages and didn’t see anything about it.
1 year

Big chapter dump or space it out?

LoraDayton:
Hiccupx has it right. The way the platform is built means you have to kind of experiment with strategy, and adjust that strategy as you build an audience. I don't have many stories here, this just has to do with my creative output in general recently, but I am going to be ramping it up this year considerably. However the strategy in which I publish differs based on which platform.

There are some stories I personally will probably be making exclusive and premium here, but not all of my mine are going to fit the format of this platform so it has to be written for it because it has limitations.


Your question really depends on the type of story, your format, knowing the platform, knowing the audience, and as others have said knowing that the audience changes based on which platform you're on. "Going wide" which means having your work available in multiple places is really going to be key overall.

If you have a very long story, as you said If you're looking at a 60,000 word novel, I'm not even sure I would post that here at all because of the way the platform is built. It's really just not meant for long-form stories and I tend to not read them because it's just not easy to consume it. There are some whose stories I did decide to give a shot in a fell into it and so I'll read when there's an update, but I just don't click with reading long form ones here. DeviantArt and AO3 are waaaaay better for that.


That's very interesting. What do you see as the limitations here for reading long form stories: is it mostly the clunky chapter access mechanics? Because that's super clunky

I have a ton of issues with posting longer, more involved content here. The formatting options blow and the character restriction is annoying (but that's part of a lot of sites)
1 year

Big chapter dump or space it out?

ILuvChubbyChix:
Just my opinion, but... post the entire thing in one go, or don't post it at all. Don't add chapters over time. You might be thinking.. why? Don't TV shows release new episodes once a week?

TV shows do release once a week, but often times the story and plot line of every episode may very well be determined before the season premier. Then it's a question of the actors and set staying on script.

Alternatively, you could write the entire story in one go and post new chapters over time like a TV show, but not everyone is able to release new chapters reliably, like clockwork. Life happens, there's schedule problems, some folks are just too busy, technical problems, or you just forget about it. I don't know if you'd be able to post new chapters on a schedule reliably, or not.

TV shows are different, since that's the entire point of the company. They will release the next episode, so you know it's coming for a fact.

There's also the risk of writer's block, which is why I'd recommend against writing the story as you go. There's a very creative aspect, and I don't believe this can be rushed under pressure.

Why do I say this? I don't read the stories very often, but if there's anything I really, really dislike and leaves a very bad taste in my mouth, it's an unfinished story that the author forgot about, and it's been weeks or months. It's about 100 times worse if there's a serious cliffhanger at the end that never gets resolved. A cliffhanger at the end of a TV episode, particularly a multi-part extra long TV episode, I don't mind because I know the conclusion will come.

I don't know if you've ever played the game Half-Life 2, but if you have, you'd know exactly what I'm talking about, and the very bad feeling that was caused. Eventually, it got so bad one of the story writers basically posted the plot of what would have been the third episode (with changed names to dodge copyright laws) just to give fans some sort of closure, since it was obvious Valve had no intention of releasing another game to complete the story line. It's probably a good thing Valve Software basically doesn't make games anymore, and only really administers the Steam platform, since I'm pretty sure they burned any good will they might have had. It's really too bad. Whenever they did release something, it was a very high quality product by the standards of the time.

I'd recommend using each experience, and any feedback you might get, as advice on what the next story might be like. I know one thing I like, is when an author writes multiple stories in the same universe, particularly when any one of those stories can stand on their own. You don't necessarily have to read the others to understand it. I think this would provide a lot of engagement.

I'm asking you to consider an approach similar to what most large YouTube channels use. Each uploaded video includes the entire video, and the author builds upon the feedback he gets and takes it into consideration for the next video, and so on.


I’m definitely with you on abandoned stories, but I think serialized content and “binge watch” content each have their own merits.

I posted my first story on this site complete. It’s about 30,000 words or so. Not long, not short. And while I like it a lot, there are no cliffhangers or anything like that.

My current story (which I will finish, I have the last section in outline) is less straightforward and I think there are a few good cliffhangers. I appreciate your point of view though! I want to hear both sides.
1 year

Big chapter dump or space it out?

Noname078:
But I’m by no means an expert. ... Again, this is just some thoughts of mine, it’s definitely not proven in any way, but it might help you to consider these ideas.

SomeTormentedFA:
No need for modesty; your post was spot on.

To add to your points, FF's stories page is generally a bit trash imo. The search feature is missing some pretty necessary options. What makes it even worse is the monetary aspect of it all. People spamming and clogging up the results pages with stories that you have to pay to read, and by constantly fighting for the spot in "Most Recent" by editing, like, two words in the who piece and calling it a "revision" lol. Not going to outright bash people here for putting their stories behind a paywall, though, since I do it too -- but at least I present readers with the option: either pay 2-3 bucks for a formatted, neatly-presented version of my story on Amazon Book store as an eBook, or read the story for free on FF and Deviant art's yucky layouts lol. It's just fetish fiction after all. Plus, not to be rude or anything, but I'm not going to pretend I don't think there are some examples of fetish fiction that is not written to a standard high enough to deserve being put behind this site's paywall.

In any case, OP; what other users have said already is true. I'm sure your story is engaging, especially if you've spent this much effort writing an almost novel-length piece.

Space the chapters out in such a way that your story spams up the most-recent page. Try and make sure the thumbnail picture for your story is balanced somewhere between classy/interesting and cheaply erotic lol. From what I can see, the pictures you've chosen to use are classy, but they don't tell the average browser that there's anything involving: weight gain, bellies, eroticism, or anything remotely to do with blubbery adipose tissue to begin with. I wish this WASN'T a problem... but it is. People can't help themselves but judge books by their covers -- simply due to there being so much damn content on the web. Human beings aren't meant to be quality-colanders. What I'm trying to say is: add a belly in your story's cover image, somewhere, anywhere, and I'd put a bet on your story getting a higher engagement ratio.

Also, perhaps you could even just outright insert a "note" at the top of the very first chapter asking for readers to comment and like if they enjoy the story. The more comments and likes a story has the more it seems to be promoted and viewed.

I relate completely to your grievances about story engagement on this site. Looking briefly at your two stories, I can already tell you're a talented writer. It's NOT a problem with your craft, I can tell you that much. Honestly it's just this whole site being a bit scummy, a little diseased with bots, and very "lowest-denominator". Same goes for Deviant Art, which is saved only by having a larger userbase and therefore a different nature of engagement.


A bunch of interesting points. Thank you. I’ve thought more than once that my cover picture might be holding me back. I almost want to go in the other direction and make it like an ARG with images in my photos page that have breadcrumbs to follow and help with the mystery — but that probably won’t help get new eyes on it either!

Thank you though!
1 year

Big chapter dump or space it out?

Noname078:
I’d like to add some of the things I’ve noticed in my experiences.

I have two stories that I’ve written (both unfinished). One of them was already available on deviantart before I became more active of FF. As a result I posted the chapters on this story very close together. (I’d have to check but I thinks it’s around 30 chapters) I noticed that this story didn’t get a lot of engagement and also less views/likes than what I expected, based on how it was received on deviantart. In comparison, the second story I wrote, there was more time between the chapters because I am just posting what I have finished. This second story is a lot more popular on this site than the previous story. Personally I think that posting with some time in between had this effect bc the story shows up more when people filter on ‘recently updated’. But I’m by no means an expert. It’s also important to notice that the first story was about female weight gain and the second about male weight gain, which probably plays a role it the popularity. The strange thing is that the male wg story is more popular on FF, but on deviantart it’s the female weight gain story that is more popular.
Another advantage of leaving time between chapters is that people might be discouraged by a long story and don’t want to put in that much effort. But if you upload your story more sporadically, people will start reading it and get hooked and will keep following it even if they normally don’t read longer stories.
Again, this is just some thoughts of mine, it’s definitely not proven in any way, but it might help you to consider these ideas.


Thank you, great insight!!
1 year

Big chapter dump or space it out?

Reflection Of Perfection:
Don't write based on how you THINK people will react, write what you want about. If it's good, people will come.


Well I’m not writing that way, if I was this story would be very different. I’m just wondering if different authors had more or less success with different posting schedules. Like if they find that their audiences prefer serialized content or prefer to binge read.
1 year