chapter 4

November 21, 2009

It is Lessi's second Thanksgiving dinner in a row. She gains just over 20 pounds a month, and is now 191 pounds. Winna can't help but gawk as she is served one dish after another. Winna has long since finished, but she is made to watch, as a lesson against thinking that she can help Lessi escape, against acting against Momma's wishes. Lessi feeds herself as fast as she can, and her chubby arm hangs and jiggles with fat. She she's on her 6th plate, and she knows that if she eats fast enough, overeating won't hurt as bad. And Momma has promised that if she finishes 6 full plates in an hour, she won't have to eat the 7th and 8th ones. And Momma always keeps her word, and doesn't sabotage her daughter. She wants her want to eat fast, and to feel rewarded for being a good eater. Her three A's in her online midterms already reduced her plates from 11 to 8 for all four Thanksgivings she'd have this week. Lessi has food all over her face and her chest and her breasts, still in a painfully full and overflowing bra. Her shirt lies on the floor, as its tight arms were restricting her movements. Her TV tray shakes has her fat breasts bump it rhythmically as she eats, straining against the bra with every swallow or breathe. Her soft face is full of concentration, desperately staring down the monstrous meal. Her face is red. Her eyes are narrowed. She sweats now when she eats like this. Winna suddenly realizes that Lessi has become a pig, and as she realizes that she looks just like one, a giggle bursts out. She claps her hands to her mouth, but it's too late. Lessi pauses mid chew, her pretty, stuffed mouth hanging a little open, the new halo of fat around her chin still wiggling from its obscene and un-self-conscious movement, completing the picture, and Winna snorts. She can't help it, and everything has been so tense.

Momma doesn't notice, but Lessi does. She looks down at herself, at what she is doing now, at her belly, her round unworked thighs, at all the soft fat her loving momma has poured against her will into the athletic young body she'd worked so hard to make pretty and strong. Momma smiles for a second, until big tears begin rolling down Lessi's fat cheeks. She stands up, but trips over her chain. The food spills all over Momma. Winna isn't laughing anymore. Momma doesn't know what really happened so she snaps at Lessi. She is very mean, and talks of how Lessi needs to learn respect and self-control. She is very disappointed. Lessi is sobbing, and is about to blurt what really happened, when she sees Winna's terrified little face. So slim, so pretty. She knows what will likely happen if she tells, and even as emotionally defeated as she is, she still is instinctively protective of her little baby sister. She looks defiantly at Momma, tears still streaming down her face, and Momma turns bright red.

For 5 hours Sammi holds Lessi in her chair tightly, as Momma force feeds Lessi not just plates 7 and 8, but the three she'd earned a pass on for good grades as well. Then a pumpkin pie. Then a berry pie. And finally her real punishment: the hated 2 pound stick of lard reserved only for special acts of defiance. Winna forces herself to watch the whole time. She cries and mouths apologies to Lessi, but Lessi just shakes her head softly 'no, don't let her know' and continues to struggle through the brutal gavage to save her sister. For the first time, Winna truly feels like a coward. She cries more. But even through it all, she is still in awe when she looks at her sister. Her brave, strong sister. Now covered in 70 pounds of fat. Like a pig.

Only after that does Winna truly begin to understand the desperate horror her sister now lived; only then does she realize that this is truly no game, and her loving momma is no more.


September 18, 2009

Winna sees todd with dana's fat sister. Winna is immediately furious. She storms the other direction, and doesn't notice that todd is not smiling or flirting. He is asking if she knows whats happened to Lessi. She says no.



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ideas for continuation and ending


winna tries to get them both out with the boys help
sacrifices herself to get her sister out (at about 220) and they escape to Canada, but winna is caught and brutally punished. when they return for her, Mrs. Ohler has moved them all. By the time they find them for the climax, they find Winna just under 500 pounds and virtually immobile from lack of exercise, except for her fingers with which she can still type for school, and with which she regularly pleasures her new body, the hot spot which she can barely just still reach, and which she is incredibly turned on by now and forever by the brainwashing of her mother, and her own innate natural inner fetish for being a feedee and gainer.

In Canada they recruit help to get back into Lessi's mother's place and save Winna, but it takes months.

in the climax Sammi\s extraterrestrial orignin is revealed as she consumes her mate, sucks out all of Winnas fat (which her new boyfriend and her actually really enjoyed) which was lace-fed with an important biochemical agent symbiote that had to be fed blah blah blah or some shit
she leave the planet, and the kids live happily ever after. Lessi finds a size she likes and marries Todd, while Derik helps Winna reach the size she says she wants to be if she could, but is too afraid to do willingly. he helps break her willpower, and this time lovingly forces her to reach the weight they both desire her to be, and she gets what she most wants but could never give to herself, in part because giving it to herself is not what she wants blah blah blah.
[several years later, I don't really know about this. its not bad, but definitely needs more foreshadowing, integration, and considerable revision to seem in the scifi genre. also, fuck that's dark...]