Fat is beautiful (rough draft)

Chapter 15 - (part twelve -- continued)

The Dining Hall was crowded this morning. Already a line snaked out the doors, and Lina and Daesti joined the queue, looking painfully out of place amongst the many corpulent denizens of Fatropolis. Though Fatropolis was now an established city, there must have been a time, Lina surmised, before there were laws on the books establishing regulation weights, when a good portion of the city's population would have been sent to the Fattenarium. Even some of the people around them must have been thin, or at least significantly thinner, at some point.

Lina found herself wishing she had paid more attention to that orientation holovid. And what was it the police officers had said? That they hadn't seen skinnies like Lina and Daesti in a long time? That implied that they had seen skinnies before. But Fatropolis surely had a bad reputation by now and most outsiders probably knew to avoid this city.

Lina became aware of curious glances directed toward her and Daesti.

"Hey, what are you in for?" sneered a burly, stubble-faced man with a massive gut, as he and several cohorts guffawed and elbowed each other. They must have noticed the bodysuits; everyone else wore the strange pajama-like outfits with food-themed patterns on them.

A chuffy woman with high-piled hair spoke up with a motherly tone. "You poor things! You look half-starved! Get some nutrition in you. Eat as much as you can, girls. Best thing for you."

"Oh, fresh doughnuts!" Daesti burst out, as they approached a table stacked high with the freshly baked treats.

"Just one," admonished Lina.

"You have to take one, too," said Daesti.

"Absolutely not!" Lina snapped, keeping her voice as low as possible while doing her best to maintain a decisive tone. "That's what started this mess for you in the first place."

Daesti tugged at Lina's arm and beckoned her closer. "Just take a doughnut," she whispered, with a hint of her old authoritativeness. "And be sure to fill up your plate when the buffetbot comes around."

Lina chafed. "No! If you think I'm going to--!"

Daesti pulled her in again. "Just do it. Don't worry...we'll switch plates and I'll eat everything so you won't have to. You'll call more attention to yourself if you refuse everything that's served."

Daesti had a point there. But it all was going to wind up as extra weight on her. This part of the plan would only work if one of them was eating.

"And warm cinnamon rolls!" said Daesti jubilantly, approaching trays of the icing-coated delights. "One for me! And one for you! Which means two for me!" Rather than cause a scene by arguing, Lina just looked on.

When they were seated and the buffetbot proffered stacks of pancakes topped with butter and drenched in syrup, and made-to-order 7-egg omelets, and heaps of greasy hashbrowns, and hot and cold cereals galore, poor Lina looked on worriedly as little Daesti greedily stuffed her face.

"Do me one favor," said Lina, resignedly. "At least try to eat slowly."
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Derp666 1 year
Love this story! Please though, i'm begging you, Daesti needs a chapter!
Tobbyrea 1 year
Thank you for the story
Tobbyrea 1 year
I enjoyed the new installment. Please can we have another soon
The Augmentor 1 year
New installment posted!
The Augmentor 4 years
Tobbyrea and Lyn: Thanks for the good words! And thanks for your patience between installments!
Tobbyrea 4 years
Love the story looking forward to the next chapter
Tobbyrea 6 years
Love the story keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter
Knightorder 6 years
This story is amazing! Shame a city like this doesn't actually exist. Hope to see more parts soon!
Waxer 6 years
Although I'm not sure my soul can take another wait like the last one. smiley Not that I want you to rush to give an abridged finish, keep up the amazing work, but Is there anything we can do to help?
Waxer 6 years
My heart did a flip when I saw this with new installments Keep up the amazing work!
The Augmentor 6 years
Absolutely! I should have the next installment ready to post sometime in early December, so please keep checking back. Glad you're enjoying the story so far.
TalulahJay 6 years
are you gonna keep going with this one? I’m a big fan
Eponymous 7 years
Nice to see this on here again. I've been keeping up with it on DA for a while now. I love the slow pace and the attention paid to the setting. It's got a wonderful sort of pulpish, comic book sci-fi feel to it. Kinda reminds me of the old Dirty Pair anim
Rickeb 7 years
I know there are many more chapters after they reach minimum regulation weight to become optimum weight. I look forward to them becoming the pride of Fatropolis!
Rickeb 7 years
great story so far. I for one would like to know what the minimum regulation weigh is to leave the Fattenarium,and how fat they have to become to reach optimum weight as estimated by WIDE-AS?
The Augmentor 7 years
Thank you for the kind words! Glad you're enjoying the story.
Karenjenk 7 years
I love this. It is my new favorite story here. I love the delayed growth... or domination. At the same time you give us the very thing that we come here for her.

11 out of 10

;-)
The Augmentor 7 years
All parts are posted now, right up to the current installment. Please keep checking back for more. Enjoy!
The Augmentor 1 year
Well, after nearly three years, I've finally got a new installment posted!