Fat is beautiful (rough draft)

Chapter 17 - (part fourteen)

"Shh!" cautioned Daesti. She motioned furtively with her head and eyes. Mim was making the rounds, and within a moment was walking up behind Lina's chair.

"Enjoying the food, girls?"

Daesti was midway into a mountain of Axomamman mashed potatoes. She smiled and mm-hmmed and nodded enthusiastically.

Lina, meanwhile, was deceptively rearranging the food on her plate into little mounds to give the appearance that she had eaten a substantial portion.

"What's the matter, Ms. Lazuli...not hungry?"

Lina forced a smile. "No, no, the food's great."

Mim was unconvinced. "It's not wise to try to fool me, Lina. You've barely eaten since you've been here. I know this for a fact. It seems you are actually *losing* weight, which is the exact opposite of what we want, isn't it? So, Ms. Lazuli, I'm going to have to recommend that we ramp up your counseling sessions, starting today. Right now, in fact. I'll need you to come with me." She reached for Lina's arm. "And I do mean right now."

That was all the provocation Lina needed. Without blinking, she elbowed the enormous counselor sharply in the gut. Though the fat absorbed most of the blow, Mim was nonetheless doubled over with the force of it.

"Daesti, run!" exhorted Lina, who was already over the table and racing towards a back doorway that led to a service corridor.

Daesti paused a moment to swallow one more spoonful of food.

"Daesti! Come on!" yelled Lina, stamping her foot.

Then Daesti herself also leapt up and splattered the plate of mashed potatoes in Mim's face.

As the two young women bolted, the fatties, so preoccupied with their meals, barely acknowledged this turn of events, but now a murmuring arose from the Dining Hall, growing in volume as Lina and Daesti raced down the main service corridor, then dashed higgledy-piggledy through several intersecting passageways.

Now that they were on the lam, all their carefully conceived plans quickly evaporated in the panic of the moment. Daesti, puffing with effort and already lagging slightly behind Lina, paused to survey their options.

"Over there!" She pointed to a circular opening in one of the corridor walls, a sort of oculus, slightly out of her reach.

Standing on tiptoe, Lina was able to glance in. "Storage room, maybe. Looks safe."

"Give me a boost!"

Lina looked skeptical. "Will you fit through?"

"I think it's big enough." Daesti sounded hurt. "Hurry!"

Lina cradled her hands together to form a makeshift step. Daesti, winded, climbed up and began to clamber up into the portal. She had gotten her torso through the opening but now was trying to shimmy through to the other side of the wall. She stopped abruptly.

"Uh-oh."

"W hat's wrong?"

Daesti grunted. "I think I'm stuck." Her voice was muffled through the wall.

"No time to fuck around!" said Lina.

"I'm not! I'm stuck!"

"No, no, no!" Lina lamented. "Not now! Please, not now! Pull yourself through!"

"I'm trying!"

"Try harder!"

Daesti struggled. A few extra millimeters of flesh were all it had taken to prevent her from squeezing through.

"I told you not to eat any of that food! Now look what's happened!"
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Derp666 1 year
Love this story! Please though, i'm begging you, Daesti needs a chapter!
Tobbyrea 1 year
Thank you for the story
Tobbyrea 1 year
I enjoyed the new installment. Please can we have another soon
The Augmentor 1 year
New installment posted!
The Augmentor 4 years
Tobbyrea and Lyn: Thanks for the good words! And thanks for your patience between installments!
Tobbyrea 4 years
Love the story looking forward to the next chapter
Tobbyrea 6 years
Love the story keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter
Knightorder 6 years
This story is amazing! Shame a city like this doesn't actually exist. Hope to see more parts soon!
Waxer 6 years
Although I'm not sure my soul can take another wait like the last one. smiley Not that I want you to rush to give an abridged finish, keep up the amazing work, but Is there anything we can do to help?
Waxer 6 years
My heart did a flip when I saw this with new installments Keep up the amazing work!
The Augmentor 6 years
Absolutely! I should have the next installment ready to post sometime in early December, so please keep checking back. Glad you're enjoying the story so far.
TalulahJay 6 years
are you gonna keep going with this one? I’m a big fan
Eponymous 7 years
Nice to see this on here again. I've been keeping up with it on DA for a while now. I love the slow pace and the attention paid to the setting. It's got a wonderful sort of pulpish, comic book sci-fi feel to it. Kinda reminds me of the old Dirty Pair anim
Rickeb 7 years
I know there are many more chapters after they reach minimum regulation weight to become optimum weight. I look forward to them becoming the pride of Fatropolis!
Rickeb 7 years
great story so far. I for one would like to know what the minimum regulation weigh is to leave the Fattenarium,and how fat they have to become to reach optimum weight as estimated by WIDE-AS?
The Augmentor 7 years
Thank you for the kind words! Glad you're enjoying the story.
Karenjenk 7 years
I love this. It is my new favorite story here. I love the delayed growth... or domination. At the same time you give us the very thing that we come here for her.

11 out of 10

;-)
The Augmentor 7 years
All parts are posted now, right up to the current installment. Please keep checking back for more. Enjoy!
The Augmentor 1 year
Well, after nearly three years, I've finally got a new installment posted!