L.b.l up

Chapter 13 - #013 /+5 to relationship/

I froze up where I sat in that strange changing cylinder while trying to convince myself that I had just misheard or imagined something from the blasting techno track that seemed to be vibrating through the air. But as she spun around to face me in a rustling motion from behind me I realized that it was certainly not the case. "You were...fat..actually you were thin, then you were a bomb shell, holy hell..Step Mom" Elisa began to mumble as I realized her mind was being flooded seeming to be literally swooning where she stood her busty form teetering dangerously in her heels. I was uncharacteristically a loss for words so I simply stood up and grabbed her by the arms to steady her, her eyes were jolting in ever direction as we stood there, my dearest friend seeming to see me with new eyes. "Let's find a place to sit" a familiar voice said as Doe popped her head into the tent looking at our proximity with some mild confusion and giving us a come hither motion. "She's just a little tipsy" I told our new friend as Eliza seemed to still be a little spacey.
Thankfully Doe seemed to have a pretty good understanding of the place and it's layout must've been fairly uniform since she managed to lead us back through the dancing masses pausing to get distracted grinding off a particularly nice fronts belonging to any gender. Every step for her was one of strength confidence and control as she carved a path through the crowd like a panther stalking her prey. She was in her element and was quite impressive now that she was. Eliza's babbling had calmed down and instead she was simply staring at me and my purse like I was some kind of fascinating lava lamp.
Eventually as awkward as it was we managed to actually find what appeared to be a couple of booths in the form of fold up chairs. We took our seats my own letting out a scared squeal which got an extremely significant half smile out of Eliza. It was significant because Liza had the poker face of a hall monitor and as a result that smile meant she wasn't at her "Death Destroyer Of Worlds" level of anger. "So you two getting intimate in the changing room" Doe pried rather flatly as she began to dispense some fast food for us to snack on while we chatted together. "Maybe, what's it too you?" I quipped back taking a bite out of a taco enjoying the crunchy feeling and the taste of it. "If it's cause your interested were not dating or anything yet" Eliza followed up having declined any food for herself continuing to watch me out of the corner of her eye like some kind of puzzle that needed to be solved. "I don't think yet is a concern, her ex's are the weed girl and that home schooled chick, you're pretty out of her league" Doe said with a smirk as I simmered somewhat aggressively all regret for fattening her up like a pot bellied pig having completely disintegrated in a single sentence. "The dating pool isin't exactly vast when you chase skirts exclusively, but for those who don't...." Liza said with a single point of her crimson painted nail at some shirtless guy on a stool a little ways off, the guy looked like a good value Hemsworth and was wearing nothing except shorts and neon body paint. "Nice catch" Doe said eying the Adonis from her chair before passing me the bag of fast food taking a step out of her chair and performing an elegant hair toss. "Don't wait up" she told us with a smirk before practically bouncing off in her heels. She wore a confident smile as she strolled off but I had seen a whole mix of emotions in her eyes, she was playing a role I had come to realize a façade she had created. People being unable to stay mad at Doe is a common theme in this story and it's almost always because in her heart Doe is always just afraid of being rejected.
But nevertheless her absence left no buffer between me and my best friend so we sat there with the music blasting simply looking at each other. Neither of us were very good at silences however, we talked to each other about anything or everything. We were never afraid of our relationship falling apart because we needed each other. "So you didn't tell me you got incredibly hot magical powers related quite keenly to our shared interest, so that's worth a solid ten BF points" Elliza said in dramatic tone her voice carrying surprisingly well in the music flooded environment. BF points are not as you might've figured Boyfriend points. They're Bad Friend points a currency we devised to help cathartically work out issues with each other since we knew that we'd never lose our valued friendship. They could be exchanged for favors and I had always been the market leader in acquiring them much to my own chagrin. "And now that I've voiced my displeasure I can voice how freaking awesome that is" Eliza added in an upbeat tone before letting out a girly squeal. "Oh god I wanted to tell you I just didn't really know how to broach the topic" I offered in my own defense with a meek smile on my face as she grinned at me. "Bullshit, you got distracted with fattening up hot girls, which is at least productive" she quipped back at me the two of us seeming to have quickly returned to our rhythm of banter. "But I'm cashing in my chips tonight, first things first were gonna get out of this rave, second things second your gonna tell me everything and show me exactly how your new powers work" Eliza continued practically bouncing out of her chair, I tried to follow suite but my hips caught on the arms of the chair requiring me to wriggle my full ass free of its plastic prison. By the time I had I was already being led back through the crowd of sweaty dancing teens their glow sticks parting way in a dazzling display of light as I set off towards what would be one of the most fun nights of my life
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Comments

Eleena CoOwO... 5 years
Vvv Spirit, I know I should be patient. But now I'm really worried, what if Doe and Connie had a falling out? If Doe's eyeing the bartender does that mean she's thinking about seeing other people?
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
This must mean Deena's rival doesn't care wheather or not her targets are happy and retain personality traits when she hits them with the apps power, she must be only focused on satisfying her own desires unlike Deena.
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
It's good to see Doe is in a better mood. It appears that the settings really can change wheather or not the feeders become robotic and the feedee becomes only focused on food or not.
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
@ Tibbes

Maybe turning on the "Actively fattening another individual" on will bring up a list/textbox of people the app has found in Doe's "memory files" aka her brain, or a list of the other targets the app has data on and knows of.
Adsein 5 years
To Beefy Donuts.

You'll just have to read and find out smiley
Adsein 5 years
360 was the typo, It’s been updated
Adsein 5 years
Ah yes actually
Adsein 5 years
Hey Guys, sorry for the delay I had to take a bit of a break for Irl stuff. @FirmGrasper, it’s the second highest rated on the website in the lesbian catagory. So I think it’s more that the general taste of the website trends towards straight protagonists
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
@ BeefyDonuts

Well I'm not really into "extreme slob" stuff, but if you give credit to Adsein I'm sure she wouldn't mind if you'd make a slobbish version of her story to suit your fetish.

@ PaddedOreo

Sounds like an epilouge to me.
Eleena CoOwO... 5 years
VVVV I'd write a future fic about Deena and Eliza getting married in the future. Of course after many years of using the app both of them would be massive, mountainous butterballs, but they'd still be deeply in love! ^_^
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
@ PaddedOreo
@ BeefyDonuts

I feel that if L.B.L up was a popular TV series or something you two would be writing tons of fanfics about the characters.
Eleena CoOwO... 5 years
Speaking of being sat on...

Maybe whenever Eliza and Deena are hot and bothered again Eliza can ask her Butter Muffin to park her big blubbery butt on her face and pleasure her lover's underside as she feels Deena's weight on top of her.( *°٢°* )
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
If Deena gave Connie a feedee kink, I also worry what Mindy's response would be. She and Connie seem to have a past together, so I don't know how she'd react if she found out Deena toyed with Connie's personal fetishes.
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
She could also assign Doe as Connie's feeder and Connie as Doe's feedee like Deena's new rival did with Penny's mom, my problem with that is it would be kind of a turn off if main characters like Doe and Connie also became robotic/lost their personality.
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
@ BeefyDonuts

Well, nothing would I guess. Of course her change in mind would have to be believable and perhaps not immeadiate. It could also work if Deena were to "tweak" Doe's kinks a bit.
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
Plus, from what I've seen, Doe isn't picky about size. She seems to like thin guys, and from the evidence she's "getting it on" with Connie, she likes big girls. But that's not to say she might not like thin girls and big guys too.
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
@BeefyDonuts

Good eye, I can't believe I missed that!
But as much as it'd be nice for Doe to be a feeder, I don't think we should blame her. I think Deena's rival is still stalking and targeting Connie, but the question is why?
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
@ PaddedOreo

Can it be percieved as excessive? Certianly. But I'm not saying that means there's something wrong with you. If I remember correctly, reading erotica that you're into can actually improve mental health.
Eleena CoOwO... 5 years
VVVVVV Is it fair to say I'm excited about this story to the point of addiction if I've been checking every couple of hours everyday for the past month for new chapters? [⁄ ⁄•⁄n⁄•⁄ ⁄]
SpiritOfACar... 5 years
@ PaddedOreo

I know you don't, just let Adsein tell her story. She's the author, and sometimes authors have to excite their readers. Who knows, maybe she'll confirm it for you soon, but if not then you'll have to learn be patient.