She didn't notice a thing

chapter 8

POV: Vivian
I was woken up by Aaron again in the morning. He wakes me up at good time, I love that about him do caring of me. "Is it time for my gift now baby." I said excited to know what it was."Yes just follow me to the living room." he walk away and waited for me.

I tried to get up but there was something wrong I couldn't get up no matter how hard I try. What was wrong why can't I get up. I was getting a little freaked out so I called for Aaron. "Baby can you come here real quick please."

"Yes what is it Viv."
"I can't get up and I don't know why."
"It seems you have found your gift sweaty."
"what? What do you mean by that."
"Your immobile sweaty that is your gift."
"immobile but I'm not that big."
"Vivian look down you are that big."

When I look down I see my massive fat body it was huge. My belly so big it covers most of my legs, my legs are not as big as my belly but were thick, and mu boobs rest on top of massive round belly making them look small. When did this happen to me. "but I weighed only like four hundred pounds or so."
"No you actually weighed 805 lbs and gained more this weekend."
"how did I not notice in till now."
"Because I hided it from you with my powers."
"That why you never notice the weight and why you got so fat so quickly but all I did was make you not notice and make that you gain weight easier you did all of eating."
"Your saying it was me that did this."
"no it was both of us think about it you were gaining weight on purpose."
"I was your right I did do that."I looked down at my mountain of a belly and rubbed it.
"But how did you control me to want to gain weight."
"no I don't control I did not want a puppet I want the real you."
"how do I know your telling the truth."
"Will you have free will you can think for your self right. Look back you took so much pleasure from eating that was all you, you wanted gain weight you thought of that I did not make you."
Is he telling the truth it harder to tell but in the end does it matter, I believe him all he wanted to do was make me fat quickly and I did to.
"But why make it a secret, I you could  had told me that you wanted me like this."
"Your right but want it to be a surprise." i was and it kinda turning me on at the thought of  me not knowing maybe thats why he did it. "thank you I love your gift."

"how much do I weigh now baby I want to know."
"Yes here this is your weight."
It read 1225lbs, that a lot bigger then I thought. It amazing how fat I am but think I can go bigger no I want to get bigger, I need Aaron's help for that.
"Wow baby I'm really fat, I'm such a piggy but I want to be bigger will you feed so I can grow even more." he gets closer rubbing my giant belly and says,"Yes my piggy I will fatten you even more." I'm in heaven, I can't wait to get even fatter.

POV: Roxy 
I going to see Vivian I have not seen her I a while. She told see had the week off so she was free to hangout, made I can make her bigger then she already is. Last time I've seen her she was 805lbs maybe I can make her immobile, oh the would be great. Also maybe I can pack on some more pounds of my own hangout with Viv.

I was a the front door, I knock and it unlocked I went in to see nobody there. I looked around to see were Viv was but did see anyone excepted two maids with pot bellies came out of the room and were walking towards me.

"You most be Vivian's friend come with us she is in her room." one of the maids said as she grab my hand and we walked in. What I saw was unbelievable, Vivian's was so huge and fat her massive body was naked. She was eating and then saw me. 
"Oh...burp...hey Roxy come eat with me...burp...it's so good."
"Wow Viv your a lot bigger then last time."
"I know it's great is it not."
"Oh yeah it is you look great how much do you weigh." I say as I rub her massive gut. 
"um...I think it was 1225lbs or so."
"Its 1423lbs my lady" said one of the maids. 
"Oh really thanks Cherrie, here eat this." she give the maid a huge cake and see start eating it. The other maid look sad that she was not eating so I grab a cake a feed her it she looked so turned on by this.
"what your name sweaty."
"num...Honey...burp it's Honey."
"do you two help Viv right."
"yes...nummum...that is...burp...correct."
"you two want to help me get fatter." they both looked at each other with frosting on there faces and nodded. They laid me down on a bed next to Vivian. 
 
"I planed on this happening that why I wanted you here, you helped me get fatter so I'm helping you." said Vivia.
"um so you know about that."
"yes I do so I'm returning the favor. Oh and thank you for helping Aaron fatten me up it means a lot."
"no problem Viv but I don't think I'm going to be helping him anymore."
"why do you say that Roxy."
"cause I don't think I'm going to leave."
"it's ok he well get another assistant and maybe this one isn't such a fatty."
"hey your one to talk you bigger than me."
"yeah and you can never catch up to me, honey check her weight."
"yes my lady." she went to the end of the bed, I'm guessing the bed is a scale. I want to know to I have been pigging out a lot more lately.
"545lbs my lady."
"Roxy your such a fatty maybe you can catch up."
"oh yes I want that do much." I'm getting so turned on surrounded by all this fat.
"ok girls stuff her big and fat, i'll watch as I keep eating my food."
They started feeding me and I was loving every second of it.
8 chapters, created StoryListingCard.php 5 years , updated 5 years
13   18   53555
45678   loading

Comments

Theswordsman 5 years
I wonder if roxy will follow in her footsteps.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 it is a real relationship between them it not complete mind control but that sound like a good idea. We she becomes immobile it would surprise her but she will like it. Not a dark story.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 also he has power over her body making her gain a little easier. But for the feedee she want to eat she like it and she wanted to gain weight after see some new weight on her.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 as for the characters the feeder has the power over her mind but does control like a puppet all he does is make her not notice the weight she has gained.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 I wanted the the story to be unrealistic so would be easier to write for a first so is no health problem happen.Oh and spelling mistake sorry about that.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
The latter is preferable, as too many stories end once immobility has been reached when it's a state many readers want to hear more of. That's normally because an immobile character can't do much. So, you need others to do things to/for them.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
-immobility are the result regardless which induces it. The kicker will be that he gets to blame her for starting it all. From there, you can end the story, or keep it going via Stockholm Syndrome and the feeder's twisted intent to start a family. (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
-size. That way he can enjoy her begging and trying to fight as he force feeds her daily, until either her spirit breaks, her health takes a sudden turn, or she finds she's too big to get off the bed, and later too big to move her arms. Domination and imm
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Or will her feeder remove her conditioning because he's not just controlling but a sadist, and wants to enjoy her reaction? Maybe he'll do it when she's too big to get away, but isn't yet immobile. The house is just a soundproofed prison for someone her s
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Will all the mounting inconsistencies aid her in breaking free to see reality? Will she come close to seeing reality but be so horrified that she retreats back into the lie and let the onslaught of pleasures melt her brain? (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Last, there's the concept that makes this story so unique: hypnosis. How will it stand up to the radical change in her lifestyle? Immobility, medical devices, feeding pumps, etc? (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
I'm personally a fan of health realism. The toll carrying the extra weight takes on both body and mind, as well as medical intervention to keep the feedee comfortable and alive. PM me if you want details on real (and extreme) medical intervention.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
You've established that her feeder is manipulative, that's why she was hypnotized in the first place, so it's expected that he'll work to cut her off from the outside world before it becomes clear to others she's being fattened up. 3/
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Aside from the spelling errors, I think now that page 6 has been presented the reader will expect her to be taken to live at his place, which has been prepared for her care, comfort, and impending immobility. 2/
Chrysophase2003 5 years
It's a riveting story with excellent pacing. Most stories that change POVs present the same seen over multiple times. Instead, you know what points the reader wants to read. I think the story needs to be proofread before you post it; many spelling errors
Theswordsman 5 years
You could make it to where she bursts out of her clothing during her feast
Monokuma 5 years
This is me first story I've written on here I would like feedback on this chapter so I write the next one and if this story ends up well I continue writing stories