Broken hearted

chapter 2 - the overeating begins

After her heartbreak 10 days ago, Lucy got up at her regular time on a Saturday morning and got dressed. However, she wasn't going to hockey, she stopped doing that after her breakup. Instead she was going to the mall. Although, it seemed harder to get her clothes on than ever before. Pulling up her jeans, she realised she could barely heave them up past her softer ass. After 5 long minutes of struggling, she managed to get them on at the expense of leaving a small muffin top.
"This can't be right" She mumbled to herself as she walked over to the scale in her bathroom. When dating Luke, she was only 120lbs. But as she looked at the scale adjust itself, it finally read 126lbs! This was by no means big but despite her previous confusion, she wasn't shocked as remembered all the days at work when she binge ate on donuts, chocolate bars and milkshakes. On top of that, she had barely any excercise as she was sat down for the majority of her 8 hour shift. Even getting looks from the heavier women in the office watching her scoff down hefty amounts of sugary, fatty foods to compensate for her broken heart.

Lucy shrugged it off though and went to the mall. She was there to buy new shoes, but considering her weight gain, she opted to buy new clothes that would fit her plumper ass, boobs and stomach. Places where most of her new weight went to.

Shopping around and walking to different clothing isles started to make Lucy tired and hungry. She walked out and spotted a McDonalds. She entered and was instantly hit by the smell of burgers, fries, and other various fatty foods which would fill her now greedy appetite. At first she ordered a Big Mac, large fries and a large coke. But after she inhaled it within seconds, getting sauce and grease on her lips, the greedy pig went back for more and more and more. Something that Luke would never let her do. It even got to the point where the manager refused to serve her.
"You can't do this to a customer!" Lucy snapped, her now chunky body jiggling around her pot belly.
"Look at yourself! I'm doing you a favour. Now leave" The manager said forcefully. He was right. Lucy's belly had grown huge, and I mean huge. Her belly stretched her shirt immensely. It was hard and full of food. But Lucy didn't want to stop. She stormed out the mall as the other fast food places were warned not to serve the greedy glutton and she flopped down in her car, sweating like crazy as she was flustered and still hungry.
On her way home she stopped off at a nearby KFC and ordered two mighty buckets and a coke. Although she didn't know it, this caught the attention of an old friend who sat at the far side of the KFC. Admiring her now bloated stomach and flustered state.

Alright guys, this is my first story ever written so I hope I can get some good feedback for what I can improve. I will keep updating this story whenever I can so I hope you guys enjoy these first two chapters👍
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JoeBillyBob 5 years
Yeah, 195 is not that fat. Im thinking.......... 300 to 400. But an overall great story.
Deth 5 years
I agree with most of the comments, your weight description is not matching with the body you are describing. Good story though
Jazzman 5 years
Stared.You're describing 195 like it's 350.
My girlfriend weighed 211 and the suspension was fine in my sub compact car.
Still like the way the story flows.
Chubpup 5 years
Why does everything have to be sexual, I have a story about a girl called Lucy and she is the opposite of this girl.
Jazzman 5 years
Stared. Don't Over Speed.The best stories have patience.I like your first story.Your next one will be better.Nice job
FA Guy 5 years
You're off to a excellent start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Feedher3000 5 years
More weight please... 130 lbs will not creak floor boards, it can, but it is not a substantial weight. Just my constructive criticism.
Theswordsman 5 years
You could have them move in together
Jazzman 5 years
Good changes. Liking it better! It's a great plot idea.
AndiFive 5 years
More please!!!!
Hellofang2000 5 years
More please
Jazzman 5 years
Great plot concept. Your rate of gain is unrealistic for accidental gain The quantities are also completely unrealistic. Don't rush.Unless you seek to write a pure fantasy story then go ahead.You've got potential as a writer.