The fence

chapter 11- saving face

“None taken. He didn’t even invite me to be a groomsman.” Trevor revealed, as he resented Alana patting him on the head like that. He wasn’t a kid anymore. She didn’t have to go babying him.

“That’s fucked up. Your brother never treated you right.” Alana responded sounding offended for him.

“Yeah, he’s a scumbag.” Trevor joked in tone mimicking Alana.

“Hahahaha,” Alana belted out a little wildly with laughter. She really hadn’t expected such sass from Trevor. Her big laugh, however, caused her lower belly fat to heave upward and then slap against her underbelly, “Ouch!”

“What?” Trevor asked in surprise.

“I have splinters under my.. belly.” Alana blushed, as she realized it herself. Stupid fence..

“Let me see. Hold it up.” Trevor ordered, as Alana’s jaw dropped for a moment. She clearly wasn’t used to Trevor giving her orders. After a brief second, however, Alana put her pride to the side and did as Trevor said. With both her hands, she scooped up her belly fat and held it up for Trevor to see the splinters. He didn’t say anything. He just started picking at them with the pliers.

“This is embarrassing.” Alana admitted, as she blushed something fierce. She could hardly see Trevor working down there. Her big belly and breasts were in the way.

“Why?” Trevor asked, as he continued.

“I have to freaking hold up my rolls of fat with both hands, and you’ve probably got like a freaking six-pack.” Alana vented with a tone that conveyed vein jealousy. Trevor leaned back enough for Alana to see his face as he responded.

“I do have a six-pack. I’m running track in college. Kinda keeps you thin.” Trevor boasted, as he shot Alana a cocky smile. This was a perfect time for a little playful payback from earlier. She’d teased him with that pat on the head. Now he’d tease her with a pat on the belly. His hand playfully pinched an inch of Alana’s big belly roll, as he teased, “If you wanna lose some pounds, we could jog together this summer. I’ll slow down so you can keep up.”

“Awh! You listen to me, Trevor. I would love to be your jogging buddy this summer, but I don’t wanna embarrass you with how fast I am. I’m much more physically fit than I look.” Alana snapped in response to Trevor’s prodding. Her face was burning from embarrassment. She knew how utterly ridiculous she sounded. She just needed to say something to save face and it was the only thing she could come up with. After another moment, she thought of something better, “And shut up, you don’t have a six-pack.”

“Do too.” Trevor countered.

“Then show me.” Alana spat calling his bluff.

“Fine.” Trevor stood up and lifted up his shirt for Alana to see. Sure enough, Alana could see all six. Christ. It was like Trevor had the abs of a chiseled Greek god..

“Damn. Point taken.” Alana begrudgingly gawked, as she tried to turn her admiration into something more humbling, “You must be pretty good, huh? A real track star?”

“I’m not bad.” Trevor admitted, as he turned his attention back to plucking splinter’s out of his inflated ex-babysitter’s belly.

“I’m happy for you. Track’s a good sport.” Alana commented, “Haha, your brother put on so much muscle for football and it’s all turning to fat. Too bad for his soon to be wifey.”

“I thought you were into big muscles?” Trevor curiously asked. He was acutely aware he never had the muscular bulk of his older brother.

“I was in high school. Honestly, a six-pack is way more impressive to me now.” Alana responded without hesitation.

“Really?” Trevor responded sounding amused. Had Alana just complemented him? Did she find him.. attractive?

“Yeah. Don’t act so, naïve. I bet the girls can’t keep their hands off you.” Alana emphasized by nudging Trevor’s shoulder. She could feel the muscle. He clearly did more than running. He had to lift weights.

“Haha..” Trevor blushed. Clearly Alana had stumbled onto something. For the first time since bumping into Trevor, she felt like she’d gained some ground of confidence back. She had to remember that she was still the one in charge of this interaction. It didn’t matter that Trevor had turned into a handsome young man and that she’d eaten herself out of the realm of desirability for most men. She was older. She was more mature. She was certainly more experienced in the realm of sex and dating. She was in charge, not him. And she decided to remind him of that.
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Comments

Captzae 1 year
Still gains unintentionally so when it goes to marriage he’s got more than enough reasons under his belt to why she loves him so much they get married, I’m not author I just really like that idea 😅
Captzae 1 year
The idea of her being different from most characters and not become accepting of the weight so easily so that way it gives room for Trevor to really make her feel loved even while she still gains,
Captzae 1 year
I’ve read all of your stories and I don’t know why but this one really is my favorite and I can’t wait for the sequel to the fence. I fee that Alana should continue to gain weight but I like the idea,
Polarisdreamer 3 years
@shesgonnnabehuge It might get a sequel one day!

@Yuri33 I am still thinking about it, one day I will probably write the sequel
Yuri33 4 years
It passed 3 months from this story, have you thought about a continious?
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Yuri33 no worries in that regard, Trevor is not a feeder and Alana is not a feedee
Yuri33 4 years
You got right! But if you continious with this masterpiece please dont fall in the usual story in which he is a feeder and she is a feede
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Yuri33 I think that would be the perfect ending to their relationship, but they aren't quite there yet. Their relationship is still a secret, so first that bridge will have to be crossed.

Thanks for the feedback!
Yuri33 4 years
Se he love her and continious to spoil her!
What you say?
Its long time i dont read an amazing story like this on ff so thankyou!
Yuri33 4 years
You can go on with a marriage! After wedding alana can get more lazy and spoiled, trevor do little trying to motivate alana going into gym or going out for a run or a walk but alana is too lazy for this and continious grow fatter. Trevor accept this becou
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@saidence42 I won't rule out a longform rewrite eventually, it does sound like a fun challenge.

Thanks for the support! And thanks for the feedback! it means a lot to me!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@saidence42 I think the story would work very well in the longform, the only issue for me is the large time investment it would take to do it justice. I have other unfinished stories I want to finish before I do any more rewrites. I won't rule out a lon
Saidence42 4 years
I really loved 'Paul's Dilemma' so having this story with similar length arc would be amazing.

You're an amazing author with a true mastery over romance, pacing, and tension. I'll definitely be closely following your work.
Saidence42 4 years
I'd love to see a re-do of this story as an extended version that starts the same except instead of confessing/ falling in love straight away they slowly gravitate towards each other while Alana gets bigger.
FattyBoyy 4 years
Hey, I'm trying to write another chapter to my story. How do I do that I don't see an option for it.
Polarisdreamer 4 years
Rstlne, Thank you! Those are great ideas!
Rstlne 4 years
*Maybe Trevor tries to change that?
Rstlne 4 years
Yeah, I think you should continue.

Ideas:
- Telling the other side of the story with Noah and Stephanie
- Continuing the current story.
- Maybe Alana starts to lose weight for a while because she is no longer stressed. And maybe Trevor tries to ch
Rstlne 4 years
Still reading but enjoying it so far (:
Polarisdreamer 4 years
jimbo, I do have a few ideas for a sequel for this story, but I'm not sure the best way to gauge people's interest in a continuation. I might work on one in the future.

In the meantime, if people have ideas for a sequel, please let me know. It could
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