The ride of a lifetime

Chapter 2 - emergency stop

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It was amazing what you could find out about someone, simply by observing them every morning. Most days, the new, sexy girl carried a laptop bag with her, as well as another bag, presumably for her gym stuff; not surprising considering how fit and toned she looked, Logan thought dreamily. Then, some days, when the train wasn’t packed so tightly, the woman would get out her laptop and start typing away. Logan could see the letterhead of a company he had heard of within the City. He squinted his eyes trying to see the name she was signing the letter with. ‘Danielle Harris’, he read with a sigh of pleasure; he had a name at last!

It was a game Logan would play each morning, being the detective, trying to catch as many clues as he could; not that any of them would ever serve any purpose. Besides everything, the girl was wearing a wedding ring, leaving her thoroughly out of bounds. But Logan would still sit up a little taller each morning as they pulled into Woking, eager to see his favourite UK crush. But what else was there to do on a boring British commute each day?

Danielle’s face looked so kind, with bright, smiling eyes, even on a miserable Monday morning. Logan began to imagine a personality for her and concocted an entire life and backstory for her in his own head. It certainly helped to pass the time.

It was the Spring when Logan noticed it for the first time. He had been travelling on this train for seven months now and for the last few of those, sexy Danielle had been wearing a long, thick winter coat that went down to her knees. However, the end of March had brought about the first unseasonably warm spell of the year, and Danielle arrived at Woking station dressed simply in a tight, white blouse and fitted skirt. Looking out for her that day, Logan almost did a double take, staring, quite obviously as the woman came inside their usual carriage, which pulled up about three-quarters of the way down the platform each morning. Gorgeous Danielle seemed to be carrying a few extra pounds, he realised with a slight thrill. It was clear from the tight fit of Danielle’s skirt that there was a little extra padding to her sexy rear. But also in her blouse, the flat stomach was showing signs of strain, replaced by a slight pushing out of additional fat. Her chest too, seemed to be blossoming and straining against the buttons! Logan could not believe it, sneaking little glances of Danielle whenever he could get away with it. How had he not noticed? Now that he was looking properly, he could even see it in the girl’s face: a small and slight puddle of fat beginning under the chin.

Was it possible? Could this sexy girl be getting even cuter?
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Comments

LoopsnBloops 7 months
This is one of my favorite stories on the site. It stops at a good place but I really want an epilogue that offers an even sexier finish to things.
Karenjenk 3 years
I just read this again.
a romantic read.
i love how subtle it all is
Feeder862 4 years
Thank you. It's been a while since I wrote this and it still upsets me that no one noticed all my train pun chapter headings. They took so long to think up as well!
Jellyroll 4 years
I loved this!!!
Aquarius64 4 years
I love inventing life stories about people I don’t know when I’m on a long journey!
Lpark435 4 years
By far my favorite of your stories, excellent plot, characters, everything. Hope the guy let all his guards down and stays, would just flatten the story completely, or he asks her to go with him, either one would work.
Feeder862 4 years
Final chapter will be posted tomorrow. Will he stay, or will he go?!
Jazzman 4 years
So Good!:Maybe your best ever!
Theswordsman 4 years
Love it
Td0057 4 years
As always, great story. I like the twist of Logan being encouraged. Looking forward to more.
Feeder862 4 years
Thanks for all of your interest in this story. It will have seventeen chapters once it is completed.
Fatchance 4 years
Love how this story is developing!
Fatchance 4 years
This story is habit forming. Nicely done ... please continue!
Jazzman 4 years
So so Good I have a little tension though just like Collette and Eric. The guy needs to grow a set and tell her how he really feels. It's not a criticism. Both stories are among my favorites.
Akwolfgrl13 4 years
I hope thires more to come!
Daleanator 4 years
Great story! Can't wait for more.
Perenolde 4 years
Great start! Look forward to reading more!
Iread247 4 years
Each story has been everything. I have really been enjoying them.
Jazzman 4 years
Exceptional. Reminds me of Swordfish my all time favorite author. High praise indeed!