Mia's junior year

chapter 3- this means war (p3)

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“No! Why was Hannah Ferrell here?” Mia demanded, as Kate could smell the rum on Mia’s breath. She’d clearly been drinking a lot, which meant she’d drunk a lot of pop too. Unfortunately, Kate couldn’t spot even a tiny bit of bloating across Mia’s tight waistline.

“I didn’t invite her.” Kate protested, as she tried to play it cool and line up a throw for her pong game. To Kate’s surprise, Mia was quick to pull her hand down in a demanding fashion.

“Then we need a freaking bouncer next time.” Mia fumed, as Kate could tell Mia was pissed. She needed to calm her down or she’d make a scene for sure.

“What’s wrong with Hannah? She always seems nice.” Kate muttered trying to ease the tension.

“She’s nice, to boys, because she’s desperate for anyone and everyone to f*ck her. The slut has zero standards. She’s not pretty, she’s not smart and she’s not nice, but more importantly she’s a lying bitch who likes to spread false rumors about me because she’s jealous.” Mia growled. Kate could see that plenty of people were eavesdropping, but Mia either didn’t notice or didn’t care.

“Calm down Mia. Next time I’ll be sure to keep the invite list smaller and we can have someone be a bouncer.” Kate assured Mia. Mia was satisfied with Kate’s response but there was still some further business to be had. Kate’s eye-catching getup certainly drew attention to her bust and shapely hips, but it didn’t hide the protruding bit of soft flesh that appeared freshly bloated around the lower portion of Kate’s abdomen. It was the perfect target.

“I’m calm.” Mia muttered, as she looked around. Everyone’s attention at the table was on her. Perfect. “Can I play?”

“We are in the middle of a game?” Kate explained, as Mia grabbed the pong ball from Kate’s hand and slowly poked Kate’s soft midsection with her other one. Kate’s eyes widened with a mix of surprise and fear, as she felt Mia’s touch.

“Don’t you have to go to the bathroom? You’re looking hella bloated.” Mia evilly teased with a smug expression on her face, as Kate’s cheeks blushed a fierce red color. Everybody’s eyes immediately followed Mia’s finger. Kate even gulped as she looked downward and regretted what she saw. She was sporting a little round food baby from all the beer, but what made it worse was that it didn’t look firmly packed underneath a muscled stomach, it served to extenuate the soft bit of chub Kate had been unable to vanquish from her body over the summer. It looked like fat. And Mia knew that. That’s why she’d drawn everybody’s attention to it. Kate was lucky Mia gave her an out for this humiliating situation, this time.

“Yeah, you can play till I get back.” Kate reluctantly gave in as she accepted Mia’s will. The last thing Kate wanted was to subject herself to any more humiliation.

“Oh, and I can’t find the key for the upstairs bathroom, so you’ll have to use the downstairs one like everyone else.” Mia smugly responded, as Kate heard Mia’s message loud and clear. Mia had effectively banished her from her own pong game. There was no use fighting her on it. There was nothing she could do. Yet. But in time, Kate swore to make Mia pay for this.

“Okay, I guess I’ll go wait in line. Good luck.” Kate replied, as she bit her tongue. There was nothing she could say to get back at Mia.

“Thanks Kate!” Mia cheered, as she happily lined up her first shot.

“Yeah.. you’re welcome.” Kate droned, as she walked back to the bar and grabbed herself a beer. Mia always had to be the center of attention. It was so annoying. Kate knew she needed to calm down, so she went into the kitchen to spectate how that pong game was going. Sitting against the countertop alone, she was a bit disappointed that Mia looked just as perfect as ever. After a whole week of trying to sabotage her, she had nothing to show for it. Kate took a pretty big swig of beer to ease her thoughts. Her plan wasn’t going to pay off in a week, she was in this for the long haul. Kate closed her eyes and imagined the day when Mia’s reign of terror came crashing down. It was such a pleasant daydream Kate didn’t even notice the guy causally walking over to sit next to her.
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Comments

Non-suspicious 4 years
...original story skip over this one because they feel that they've already read it?)

whatever the reason, hopefully all this needs is a little time
Non-suspicious 4 years
although i do love this story, it's completely understandable that you'd want to focus your efforts on other works. that being said, im crossing my fingers that more ppl will find this story on here and give it a like. (maybe people who've read the origin
BlissfullyAware 4 years
Also I know you’re disappointed in views and stuff, but remember FF ain’t the end all be all of literotica! You’ve got the goods- I hope you’ll continue writing WHATEVER you’re inspired to. Although- I await volume 2 eagerly.
BlissfullyAware 4 years
(Cont) ground is super engaging. Bravo. You’ve made a superior WG story by having the weight gain be a means to an end of your characters’ motivation.
BlissfullyAware 4 years
Oh HELL yeah!!! This is a fantastic ending to volume 1. Fav character is Kate because she’s the underdog protagonist, BUT she doesn’t just win all the time, she’s constantly exchanging jabs with Mia- the fact you have them both gain and lose (lol) g
Davidewol 4 years
Definitely enjoying this story and I don't want to sound rude saying this but maybe people can't be bothered reading the 100 chapters on here, that being said I'm a big fan of you and your work and will happily read it on whatever site you choose to post
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@non-suspicious That's very kind of you to say! An older version of this story exists on DA from 5 years ago, this current version is a rewrite of that old one
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Yeanayea Glad you've been enjoying! Thank you!
Non-suspicious 4 years
hell yeah i love this one. this story is iconic, have u posted it before somewhere else cuz i think i remember reading it lol. anyways, love ur writing. cheers
Yeanayea 4 years
Really liking the story! I'm interested to see where you take it but I'm liking the idea of Kate continuing to get bigger. Keep it up!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@BlissfullyAware That's fantastic to hear! I was thinking people were not enjoying this one too much
BlissfullyAware 4 years
Survived and thrived- very much enjoying the pace and the spy-vs-spy like plot
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@BlissfullyAware Oh my gosh I hope you survived the ride. I'll try and post a chapter a day until this one is finished so stay tuned
BlissfullyAware 4 years
ohhhhh FUCK yeah, man, you just made me binge through 75 pages, you madman
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Thiccboi Thank you very much!
Thiccboi 4 years
Nice
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Sexypeggy Glad you are enjoying so far!
Sexypeggy 4 years
You storye is good
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