Mia's junior year

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  By Polarisdreamer

Chapter 100 - author's note

Listen to this chapter - just press play:
Author's Note:


This is the end of Volume 1. With that said, this story has 5 more volumes planned, and I am trying to weigh in my head if the time investment to get those volumes done would be worth it or if I should focus my efforts on other (shorter) stories. It appears to me that on this site, Mia's Junior Year: Volume 1 has preformed pretty poorly compared to my other stories on here. I am measuring this in terms of readership, likes received (aka, interest in the story), and comments.

If I were to start working on Volume 2 and eventually post it here, I would like to see this story reach over 75 'likes' like some of my other stories on here have. If there is enough passion for Volume 2, then when I write it, I will post it on here when it is done.


In the meantime, I would love feedback regarding a few things if you've enjoyed the story up to this point:

First, Who was your favorite character in the volume? (And why?)

Second, What was your favorite part of the story so far? (and generally, what did you find enjoyable about the story? the plot? the description? the characters? the scenarios? The orientation toward gaining weight[both girls hated the idea of gaining]?)

Third, How did you feel about the ending of chapter 21?

Again, feedback will be very important for me deciding to continue the story to volume 2. I do have an interest in completing the story, but I also have other projects that I want to work on. (To be clear my concern with the story is low reader retention. On DA over two thirds of people who started reading the story never made it to the last chapter. That tells me something is wrong with the story or it is just not broad in its appeal. It'd like to figure out the issue haha)

So If you want to keep this story alive on this site in the future, consider giving it a 'like' and maybe a comment with feedback for me. It would be very helpful to me.

Please keep in mind the character limit on comments. You could always send me a message if you need more space to write, or break up a long comment into multiple parts.

Thanks for reading those of you who stuck with this story the whole time! It really means a lot to me!
College Fiction Revenge/Jealousy/Envy Betting/Competition Humiliation/Teasing Feeding/Stuffing Clothes padding Spoilt Competitive Romantic Female Straight Weight gain Friends/Roommates
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Mari1234 1 year
I like things going slow. keeps it real.
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Mari1234 1 year
Fav character is Mia so Far. hahahahaha
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Syntactical 1 year
In conclusion: really enjoying your other story "Fed Up," so hoping that in vol. 2 and beyond, the gain is closer to that - the slow burn here is a bit too slow, we want stuckup Mia to be FAT haha.
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Syntactical 1 year
... how Kate and Mia were gaining. Like and hate how they both hate the idea of gaining: like because it will be sweet when they can't stop it, hate because it drags the pace a little too much.
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Syntactical 1 year
To answer some questions: most characters were pretty annoying but that was by design... liked Lara and Jay the most, Kate better than Mia for sure. Fav part: gaining descriptions + others noticing...
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Syntactical 1 year
Hi! Don't know when vol. 2 is coming, but this was good. Probably not as popular because the gain took a really long time and, for Mia, wasn't substantial by the end. Really hope she gains a ton soon.
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Ao01 1 year
next volume. Because Kate had served him, they could have gone into the lazy life and were both overweight. We'll have to wait and see, very excited.
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Ao01 1 year
I waited 100 pages for Mia to gain weight. I was happy to see that he gained 10lbs, albeit hard. It was amazing that Mia even thought she hadn't gained any weight. I want Mia to win the race in the+++
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Montana 2 years
And the writing itself is just wonderful. I feel like I’m actually reading a good book, not just wg fiction, but a great story that just so happens to be wg smiley Im devoted to seeing the characters more
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Montana 2 years
It seems like the real weight gain is about to begin and I for one can’t weight to see Mia finally pack in the weight! And I can only assume chubby Kate will keep growing at the same time. Love this!
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Montana 2 years
Love this story! To me it’s been more than just a weight gain story, as in all they didn’t gain much weight in 99 pages, but it really drew me in! …cont
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Polarisdreamer 3 years
@Vidar I am not sure, but I will finish it eventually
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Polarisdreamer 3 years
@Vidar Thank you very much! That is very kind! That might very well be Kate's plan!
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Polarisdreamer 3 years
@Fire5665 I plan on it. I have a few stories I'd like to do first, but I will return to this one. Thanks for the interest!
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Fire5665 3 years
Write more please!!!
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Polarisdreamer 3 years
Oh my gosh, I had not realized so many people commented on this. It seems like a lot of comments got cut off by the word limit, but thank you! I'll consider returning to this project in the future!
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Jack05401 3 years
I loved this story, it pulled me along with your very good writing and surprises along the way like Mia almost losing that last race because of the weight she unknowingly gained due to Kate's earlier upsizing of her panties and pants by putting the origin
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ChrisF 4 years
Excellent story. Think less views because it took a very long time for the WG to get going, but if hope to see where this goes in volume 2
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BS Writer 4 years
You’re not going to get as many likes, but the story is amazing and you do have more devoted, if quiet fans. So I highly encourage you to continue writing what you feel to be the most satisfying thing knowing that people will be dedicated to following t
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BS Writer 4 years
I think someone else made a great point when they said something along the lines of pointing out that this story is very rich and character driven which is not what the majority of people who are on sites like this are looking for.

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