Mia's junior year

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  By Polarisdreamer

Chapter 100 - author's note

Listen to this chapter - just press play:
Author's Note:


This is the end of Volume 1. With that said, this story has 5 more volumes planned, and I am trying to weigh in my head if the time investment to get those volumes done would be worth it or if I should focus my efforts on other (shorter) stories. It appears to me that on this site, Mia's Junior Year: Volume 1 has preformed pretty poorly compared to my other stories on here. I am measuring this in terms of readership, likes received (aka, interest in the story), and comments.

If I were to start working on Volume 2 and eventually post it here, I would like to see this story reach over 75 'likes' like some of my other stories on here have. If there is enough passion for Volume 2, then when I write it, I will post it on here when it is done.


In the meantime, I would love feedback regarding a few things if you've enjoyed the story up to this point:

First, Who was your favorite character in the volume? (And why?)

Second, What was your favorite part of the story so far? (and generally, what did you find enjoyable about the story? the plot? the description? the characters? the scenarios? The orientation toward gaining weight[both girls hated the idea of gaining]?)

Third, How did you feel about the ending of chapter 21?

Again, feedback will be very important for me deciding to continue the story to volume 2. I do have an interest in completing the story, but I also have other projects that I want to work on. (To be clear my concern with the story is low reader retention. On DA over two thirds of people who started reading the story never made it to the last chapter. That tells me something is wrong with the story or it is just not broad in its appeal. It'd like to figure out the issue haha)

So If you want to keep this story alive on this site in the future, consider giving it a 'like' and maybe a comment with feedback for me. It would be very helpful to me.

Please keep in mind the character limit on comments. You could always send me a message if you need more space to write, or break up a long comment into multiple parts.

Thanks for reading those of you who stuck with this story the whole time! It really means a lot to me!
College Fiction Revenge/Jealousy/Envy Betting/Competition Humiliation/Teasing Feeding/Stuffing Clothes padding Spoilt Competitive Romantic Female Straight Weight gain Friends/Roommates
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BS Writer 4 years
I loved this story and hopes it continues. I feel like the end really set up volume two to be an amazing story where Mia finally gets her comeuppance and the humiliation she deserves.
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Lucid Ego 4 years
Commenting on this site is really annoying^^
Thank you so far!
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Lucid Ego 4 years
Hearing that you have planned 5 Volumes for this story got me excited though i can understand that you want the recognition for the work you put into
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Lucid Ego 4 years
Made this ACC to tell you that i enjoyed this story very much so far. The characters seem refreshing to me and i like the pace of it. My favorite parts have been the encounter between Kate and Jay and the twisted game between Kate and Mia. Hearing that y
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Valerio 4 years
I reccomand this story to all, for the plot,events that are not trivial, the costant uploading and your greet writing, I really like kate and when she looks embarassed I hope you continue with the story. (Sorry for my english)
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Valerio 4 years
This is my favorite stories on the website, I really like because have a "slow gain" and the characters feel alive, and thats something that didn't see to much infact many story have characters that are only for the fetish but don't have a personality.
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Sexypeggy 4 years
Hello . I really love your story that I literally devour.
iam surprised that you had planned 5 chapter.
it's a good surprise for me. Me like too, kate.
because she want the revenge the mia .
is nice body .
My like part or Mia burp .
imag
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ClearSkyNZ 4 years
But honestly I think your one of the best writers when it comes to writing in this genre of this fetish. It's hard to find stories where you care about the characters and their motivations as well as having the fetish present. Keep up the great work!
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ClearSkyNZ 4 years
I love the detail you add to the story, but I think the reason some people don't make it to the end is because of how detailed you develop these characters and the lack of sexual scenes with their weight gain
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ClearSkyNZ 4 years
I think the way you set up these characters and their goals was done really well. I loved the intimate moments Kate would have with Jay. It was a nice change of pace from the pure hate she would feel for Mia
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Tttfeeder 4 years
Lost some weight over the summer and gets her revenge in their senior year! At the end of the day it’s your story though, keep up the great work!
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Tttfeeder 4 years
My favourite story of yours yet I checked for new chapters daily. My idea for the rest of it is to have Mia gain the weight but somehow win the bet and lose the weight. It would be interesting if she humiliated Kate for the rest of the year, but then Kate
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
AlexandrKerensky thank you that's very kind! the plot of Volume 2 is already basically set in stone, so feel free to let me know your thoughts! You're english is great!
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
@BlissfullyAware thank you! That's very useful feedback! Thanks for the support!
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
gfgadgfhd, Chubbybelly1029, thank you

Davidewol You are probably right. Thanks!
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
@non-suspcious I don't mind the comment spam, but if you feel it would be easier, feel free to message, I really appreciate your feedback!
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Vladimir B 4 years
...want to disturb the organic environment that has developed in your story. Sorry for my English)
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Vladimir B 4 years
I liked the story, thank you very much, almost every day I read with binge. Quite a long time (and maybe never) I have not met so elaborate, large and interesting stories. I would express my opinion about events and characters, but I do not want to dist
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Non-suspicious 4 years
... is very memorable to me. (i keep overestimating the character limit on these comments lol... prolly should've just messaged u but oh well)

do u mind the comment spam or should i message u the rest lol
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Non-suspicious 4 years
very hard for me to pick a favorite character-- part of why i love ur writing is that u take the time to give even the side characters distinct personalities.

same for the second point-- u write everything very well. the overall plot and writing style
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