Mia's junior year

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  By Polarisdreamer

Chapter 100 - author's note

Listen to this chapter - just press play:
Author's Note:


This is the end of Volume 1. With that said, this story has 5 more volumes planned, and I am trying to weigh in my head if the time investment to get those volumes done would be worth it or if I should focus my efforts on other (shorter) stories. It appears to me that on this site, Mia's Junior Year: Volume 1 has preformed pretty poorly compared to my other stories on here. I am measuring this in terms of readership, likes received (aka, interest in the story), and comments.

If I were to start working on Volume 2 and eventually post it here, I would like to see this story reach over 75 'likes' like some of my other stories on here have. If there is enough passion for Volume 2, then when I write it, I will post it on here when it is done.


In the meantime, I would love feedback regarding a few things if you've enjoyed the story up to this point:

First, Who was your favorite character in the volume? (And why?)

Second, What was your favorite part of the story so far? (and generally, what did you find enjoyable about the story? the plot? the description? the characters? the scenarios? The orientation toward gaining weight[both girls hated the idea of gaining]?)

Third, How did you feel about the ending of chapter 21?

Again, feedback will be very important for me deciding to continue the story to volume 2. I do have an interest in completing the story, but I also have other projects that I want to work on. (To be clear my concern with the story is low reader retention. On DA over two thirds of people who started reading the story never made it to the last chapter. That tells me something is wrong with the story or it is just not broad in its appeal. It'd like to figure out the issue haha)

So If you want to keep this story alive on this site in the future, consider giving it a 'like' and maybe a comment with feedback for me. It would be very helpful to me.

Please keep in mind the character limit on comments. You could always send me a message if you need more space to write, or break up a long comment into multiple parts.

Thanks for reading those of you who stuck with this story the whole time! It really means a lot to me!
College Fiction Revenge/Jealousy/Envy Betting/Competition Humiliation/Teasing Feeding/Stuffing Clothes padding Spoilt Competitive Romantic Female Straight Weight gain Friends/Roommates
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Non-suspicious 4 years
...original story skip over this one because they feel that they've already read it?)

whatever the reason, hopefully all this needs is a little time
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Non-suspicious 4 years
although i do love this story, it's completely understandable that you'd want to focus your efforts on other works. that being said, im crossing my fingers that more ppl will find this story on here and give it a like. (maybe people who've read the origin
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BlissfullyAware 4 years
Also I know you’re disappointed in views and stuff, but remember FF ain’t the end all be all of literotica! You’ve got the goods- I hope you’ll continue writing WHATEVER you’re inspired to. Although- I await volume 2 eagerly.
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BlissfullyAware 4 years
(Cont) ground is super engaging. Bravo. You’ve made a superior WG story by having the weight gain be a means to an end of your characters’ motivation.
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BlissfullyAware 4 years
Oh HELL yeah!!! This is a fantastic ending to volume 1. Fav character is Kate because she’s the underdog protagonist, BUT she doesn’t just win all the time, she’s constantly exchanging jabs with Mia- the fact you have them both gain and lose (lol) g
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Davidewol 4 years
Definitely enjoying this story and I don't want to sound rude saying this but maybe people can't be bothered reading the 100 chapters on here, that being said I'm a big fan of you and your work and will happily read it on whatever site you choose to post
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
@non-suspicious That's very kind of you to say! An older version of this story exists on DA from 5 years ago, this current version is a rewrite of that old one
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Yeanayea Glad you've been enjoying! Thank you!
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Non-suspicious 4 years
hell yeah i love this one. this story is iconic, have u posted it before somewhere else cuz i think i remember reading it lol. anyways, love ur writing. cheers
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Yeanayea 4 years
Really liking the story! I'm interested to see where you take it but I'm liking the idea of Kate continuing to get bigger. Keep it up!
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
@BlissfullyAware That's fantastic to hear! I was thinking people were not enjoying this one too much
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BlissfullyAware 4 years
Survived and thrived- very much enjoying the pace and the spy-vs-spy like plot
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
@BlissfullyAware Oh my gosh I hope you survived the ride. I'll try and post a chapter a day until this one is finished so stay tuned
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BlissfullyAware 4 years
ohhhhh FUCK yeah, man, you just made me binge through 75 pages, you madman
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Thiccboi Thank you very much!
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Thiccboi 4 years
Nice
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Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Sexypeggy Glad you are enjoying so far!
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Sexypeggy 4 years
You storye is good
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