Carly

chapter 4: carly's past

2 years ago:
Carly Peterson wakes up covered in blood walking through the Ally way in Paris, Pennsylvania when it is snowing while nude
Store clerk: hey!
Carly is about to collapse
Store clerk: call 911
Carly wakes up in the hospital
Carly: hey officer, am I arrested for public nudity?
John: no but it is against the law but you were in a situation of domestic violence
Carly: domestic violence?
John: my wife was killed by a drunk rapist
Carly: I'm so sorry
John: Carly Amelia Peterson, daughter of Vivian Lynn Cummings
Carly: I hate her
John: everybody does, because she's a criminal
Carly: all my life I wanted to be away from her, she always set me up with guys who would beat me to death
John: I don't know if you know this but there was a file in 2003 that would spark interest to you, an 8 year old was tied up to a tree in the cold winter cops freed her she was shakin beating Left for Dead
Carly: she never loved me
John: I knew your father
Carly: what?
John: he was fat and he had a heart of gold and I didn't want to lose him as a friend I loved him because he was my brother
Carly: are you saying?
John: I'm your uncle
Carly: why didn't you save me a long time ago?
John: you have medical condition, every time you go near other fit people you always manage to break down and collapse
Carly: I'm anorexic?
John: yes, deep down you are fat on the inside
Carly: how do I break free from being anorexic?
John: do whatever you were born to be
Carly: secretary go out and eat?
John: yes
Jennifer: Carly?
Carly: Jennifer, I'm fat
Jennifer: no you're not
Carly: not on the outside, but the inside
Carly fires up a cigarette
Jennifer: if you are asking me to get you to whatever you are born to be, it would have to be secret
Carly and Jennifer hug
Present:
Carly sits in a room with Jennifer, Charles and Shawn
Jennifer: you are catching up
Carly: yes I am, we watch movies at the house tonight and make our bucket list before Jennifer and Charles get married and move and Shawn and I get married
Jennifer: yes
A week later:
Carly drinks gainer shakes with Shawn and a agent arrives to get Jennifer and Carly into the feederism business
Carly and Jennifer accepts
Shawn and Charles supports them
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Comments

Austin Micha... 4 years
Thanks for the feedback to be honest with you this was actually an original story about weight gain with a fictional character like for instance I've been going on the internet looking up fat girls for so long but besides that I usually am a fan of Marvel
Theswordsman 4 years
I can just imagine how her mom will react in five years
Math Machine 4 years
You have a real talent. I think you should proofread other people’s work.