The fat wife

Chapter 22 - author's note

Listen to this chapter - just press play:
Author's Note:

That’s it! I hope you enjoyed the story! It has been a fun ride writing this. For those who might not have figured it out, Claire and Paul are indeed the same characters from my story, “Paul’s Dilemma.” However, you might recognize some other characters in the story from other stories by either myself or Berserker1133. I hope fans of our writing will enjoy these little crossovers and nods to previous stories, although it was my goal to make this story stand on its own, not just as a sequel to “Paul’s Dilemma,” “Fail Better,” “Grandma’s Cooking,” and others.

If you enjoyed the story please let me know! Please consider giving the story a 'like' and maybe a comment with feedback for me. It would be very helpful for getting my stories noticed by those who might enjoy them. Also, please keep in mind the character limit on comments. You could always send me a message if you need more space to write, or break up a long comment into multiple parts.

Again, I really would love some feedback on this! If you need some questions to guide your feedback, here is what I want to know:

What did you think of the story?

Who was your favorite character??

Did you enjoy the conclusion??

And most importantly: Which scene was your favorite and why??

Thanks again for reading! It really means a lot to me! And a big thanks to Berserker1133 who made all this possible in the first place!
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Comments

Shugmashow 6 months
I’ve read kimmies interactive on deviant will that ever be continued?
Polarisdreamer 5 months
Yes, I do plan to continue it eventually, once I finish Mia's Junior Year: Volume 2, or The Queen of Cabin 9, I'll return to Kimmie interactive
NCFREEDOM 1 year
Claire Bear was my favorite as she would always blame Paul it was nice you worked in her sisters. What was their Mom and Grand like was curious
Polarisdreamer 5 months
Claire's mom works at a hair salon, is a nurturing free spirit, and her dad is a warden for a prison, and is equally strict and loving. The bits about her parents were covered Paul's Dilemma at som
NCFREEDOM 1 year
Great stories loved the audio as about the only books i read are money and car books lol Something so appealing of all the fat woman. I like them all getting fat.
I always wanted to write one
Polarisdreamer 5 months
Go for it! I have a WG writing tutorial on my DA page, it could help you get started
DanishPastries 1 year
This story is not entirely unlike my own marriage. I enjoy how you can find a good balance between plot and romance/erotics and I find myself genuinely interested in reading on to see what happens 🙂
Polarisdreamer 5 months
Thanks for the kind words!
Polarisdreamer 3 years
@apessoviettammy No worries, I will continue it! Not sure when I will get to it though, I do want to do one or two more stories first
Apessoviettammy 3 years
can you continue Mia’s junior year?
Polarisdreamer 3 years
@Luvchubbygirls Yes, I will

@fatforfun That might be a project of mine someday! Who knows!
Fatforfun 3 years
It would be great if you wrote a sequel where she fattens up Paul.
Luvchubbygirls 3 years
Will you be continuing mias junior year?
Polarisdreamer 3 years
@JkTab I'll have to write a story about Kimmie someday! Thank you so much for your feedback!
Polarisdreamer 3 years
@fatchance if you want Emma's story, here it is: https://fantasyfeeder.com/stories/view?id=305081

then: https://fantasyfeeder.com/stories/view?id=306106
Fatchance 3 years
Yep, just thinking about it, Emma HAS to have an interesting story!
Fatchance 3 years
Can't help wondering what is happening with the other sister .... how does she fare?

In any case, awesome stories!
Jktab 3 years
THOROUGHLY ENJOYED THE STORY. ASN TO CHARACTERS, I REALLY LIKED CLAIRE AS HER INSECURITIES AND FEELINGS WERE WELL DELINEATED AND SUPPORTED HER OVERALL CHARACTER. I GOT A KICK OUT OF KIMMIE AND FELT HER CHARACTER WOULD BE A FUN GAL TO SPEND SOME TIME WITH.
Polarisdreamer 3 years
@misskatebbw Thank you!

@wantstofatten92 Thank you! And thanks for the feedback! It might have gotten cut off a bit by the word limit, but I hear what you're saying