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Chapter 14A - Nicole

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The Night of Halloween came, and Nicole spent half the day getting ready. Tonight, she had finally convinced Kate to come out with her, which was highly unusual for the shy introverted Kate. Though Nicole had wanted Kate to get ready with her, Kate instead spent most of the day locked inside her room. This would have been an issue for Nicole's consistently ravenous appetite. However, Kate had thought ahead, making plenty of food in the morning, to keep Nicole sated throughout the day.

Easily the biggest letdown of the afternoon was how the costume company had sent her the wrong size outfit. It took her nearly 20 minutes of struggling before she shoved herself fully into her playboy bunny costume, but even then, it pinched against her lower body. Once Nicole started to pre-game with some beer, the buzz helped her forget about the discomfort. The rest of the makeup was relatively easy for Nicole to apply.

Carl came to pick Nicole up at 7 PM, and the hot young bunny knocked on Kate's door, wondering if she was ready. All she got was a squeaky response from inside.

"I.. I'm not ready yet.. just go on without me.. I'll meet you there." Nicole just shrugged and left with Carl. Kate just being weird again.

For the past few days, Nicole had been asking Kate what she would dress up as for Halloween. It was always the same. Kate would blush profusely, clearly showing her embarrassment through her pale white skin. The answer repeatedly flicked back between "You'll see.." or "I'm not sure yet." It wasn't that big of a deal, though. It was a Halloween costume. Girls had it easy. Pick anything and add "Sexy" before it. Done.

After asking Carl to take a few pictures before they departed, the couple made off towards the Rugby house. Nicole texted Kate the address and didn't get a response. It hurt to walk in her outfit, wishing their destination wasn't so far away. Yea, it was six blocks, but still.. She half wanted to get an Uber. The Halloween candy she had brought along was more than enough to keep her content. As she chewed into a tootsie roll, she saw two massive green figures walking towards her. Once Nicole realized what they were dressed up as, Nicole put her hand to her mouth, stiffing laughter.
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FTMfatty 5 months
This story is fire ๐Ÿ”ฅ!

Take your time writing more. Just know there are fans who love it.

You're really gifted with dialogue and descriptions. 10/10 amazing writing talent.
ConJohn 2 months
Cheers! I've already got the outline ready to go for the rest of the story, and fully intend on getting back into it.
Limeicecream27 7 months
Nicole is going to be so mad when/ if she figures out what Kate is doing! This story is fire!!
ConJohn 6 months
Oh, definitely a question of when.
4funnow 7 months
Donโ€™t rush Her Humiliation
ConJohn 6 months
Yeah, it'll be the next project I wrap before returning to this.
Wafflel554 8 months
It's a great read, seeing if it's still going?
ConJohn 8 months
I'm going to pick this up as soon as I finish my current project. I already have more written, just need to edit.
Booty450 11 months
Is this still going
ConJohn 11 months
100%
Taking a break from writing to recharge, then will be back with more of this.
Tttfeeder 1 year
Awesome job my favourite story in a long time! Is the story finished here?
ConJohn 1 year
Nope! Far from finished. Gonna wrap up Haley's gain and then get back to this.
Mikeboi1994 1 year
Honestly blown away with this story! I tried making a story of my own but I don't think I have it in me. I love the progression and multiple perspectives. They make the experience more immersive. ๐Ÿ˜Š
ConJohn 1 year
Multiple perspectives are hard to do, so I don't blame you. Checked out your latest story and it's pretty interesting.
Scootergirl 1 year
How much do we reckon she weighs at this point?
ConJohn 1 year
Though Nicole avoiding stepping on a scale (for now).. if she did, she'd be somewhere between 155-160 pounds at this point in the story.
Clock 1 year
two chapters on the same night? nice.
ConJohn 1 year
Totally! I think from this point, If I have a multi-pov point of the story, I may end up posting all those POVs at the same time.
Ao01 1 year
really good story. But is Nicole still not aware of her weight gain? If so, that doesn't make much sense. Also, more descriptions of the changes in Nicole's body would make the story better.
ConJohn 1 year
Yeah, I'm leaning pretty hard on Nicole's lack of awareness/inelegance/introspection with this story. Agreed, but since a lot of the story is told from the POV of someone in denial, it's a choice.
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