Sarah - gretel

Chapter 8 - part viii

At dinner Gryselda came up with a new way to pamper Sarah. She unlocked the cage and led her captive by the hand back over to the large oak dining table, where she used to feed 'Gretel' when this was all just a 'dream.' Sarah was seated on the wide, cushioned oak chair and a plate piled high with buttered fish and potatoes placed in front of her. When she made start on the lovely meal, the witch told her to stop.

The witch stepped away from the table to the kitchen counter and drew a long, razor sharp carving knife from her set. When she stepped back towards Sarah, the girl winced and tensed up, expecting her end; instead, Gryselda placed her own hand on the table, palm up, and stabbed down on it with terrifying strength. The blade chipped at the end and left a faint crease in her skin, but did not cut her. She did not even seem to feel any pain.

'I've been stabbed, slashed, bashed, beaten, and... yes my dear... even shoved into an oven.' The witch said as if she were describing a calm day on the beach.

'How many... before me...?' Sarah whispered.

The witch set the broken knife on the cutting board along with the broken tip, then washed her hands gently. She came back over to Sarah and stood behind her, her hands gently but firmly on the girl's shoulders.

'Many.' She said, nonchalant. 'There was this lovely young woman last year, Rachel, all round and fat and... juicy... She found one of my books in her high school library. She was so big, especially for how short she was, that I didn't even have to feed her up.' Gryselda licked her lips at the memory.

'So... you don't usually keep girls this long?' Sarah asked, hoping against hope that her plan was working.

'Sometimes I do, when I find one as rail thin as you were to start with... but that's not the case anymore...' Said the witch as she pinched Sarah's cherubic cheek.

'Do you ever... spare... anyone...?' Pleaded Sarah.

'I have. When I find someone just too much fun to eat.' Gryselda stooped beside Sarah and placed a finger under her chins. She drew the girl in slowly, a moment at a time, and kissed her sweetly on the cheek.

For a long time Sarah couldn't bring herself to look away from the beautiful witch.

'But... why eat girls in the first place?' The girl asked.

'Because witches like to eat people. And I like to. And since it is what I like to do, it is what I am going to do.' Said Gryselda, plainly.

'To me?' Sarah asked, breathless.

'Perhaps. Perhaps not. I won't decide until I have you all roly-poly. Speaking of which...' The witch plucked a plump, golden potato up with her fingers and popped it, sweetly, into Sarah's mouth.
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Piturekapiteka 4 years
I have to say it. Still find myself coming back to this one sometimes, what a great story, truly amazing not only for the theme but also just for how good the writing actually is by itself. One the stories that inspired me on how I made my own
Fuzzyfeeder 12 years
I wanted to put my own spin on feeding stories as much as this particular fairy tale: -Talk about how the protagonist feels, what she thinks, establish her character and not just her weight gain. --Make the witch clearly be a villain, so that she can be appealing (we're all rooting her on) and threatening at the same time, it's more dramatic. -Less emphasis on the numbers on a scale and more attention to how the body grows and changes over time, with plenty of descriptive language. -Even though there are fantastical elements (it's a fairy tale after all), such as how quickly the victim gains weight (something like a hundred pounds in six months), don't get too carried away and keep most details realistic and believable. I also mentioned many other fetishes in passing that I don't personally prefer, but that you all might want to think about as you read the story. Thank you all again and please message me with any suggestions, criticisms, or any story ideas
Hrothvitnir 12 years
Possibly the best story ever. I personally liked the way it ended, and am glad there was minimal cruelty, that would totally ruin it for me.
Fuzzyfeeder 12 years
The more and more detailed feedback I get, the more likely I am to write more. Talk to me people.
Gary1627 12 years
This story is brilliant, you can't end it just yet, we must have more.
Giantjay 12 years
Great work, nice take on the fairy tale... looking forward to the resolution!
Redneck9 12 years
oh please add more!