The last vacation

Chapter 1 - introduction

NOTE: Hi! This is my first story. I love writing, and I'm into this world since I've memory, I think. However, English is my second language, so please if you detect any mistake in the writing please tell me in the comments so I can improve it for the next chapters.
Thanks all of you for reading and I hope you really like this story. Any suggestions are welcome also! 😊

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When Luca finished his working out that Monday, he knew was coming next. He just wanted to have a shower and take a nap, but he had to prepare himself, both mentally and physically to go on vacation with his family. Over two weeks, he will be in the middle of a mountain with his parents, his little brother and his lovely dog. He knew how special this vacation was; it could be the last one before he has to leave the house and enter the university.

Luca was a great guy. That year he would be entering the study of Economics at university and he had a lot of projects in mind. His 18 years had been accomplished just a few days ago and he was very optimistic about his future.
His family was a typical one, with an Italian origin. This was reflected both in its attitudes and, of course, in its way of appreciate food. It was composed by his father, a tall and bold man who in the last 10 years has been gaining weight constantly, reaching 280lbs. That put him into obese territory and developed him a very pronounced belly, which was caused mostly by indulgences like beer, wine, pasta and barbecues. The lifestyle that every man love but also it has consequences on every man physical condition. His mother was a 40 years old attorney who was very petite but in the last few years she has been suffering the effects of a more sedentary lifestyle and the constantly eating and drinking to avoid the problems. Her 5' was compensated by 145lbs which give her an increíble pear-shaped figure, with incredible hips and the most gorgeous belly full of fattening meals, the ones that have given her an incredibly 50lbs gain in the last year. Luca's brother was a 13yrs old boy who has a good figure.

By the way, Luca has been affected by weight gain and loss since he was a little boy. He's always been a slim guy but also he has a complex with his belly since he was a kid. He never take his shirt off in front of his family, for example. He knew that he had a good shape but his belly form, the one that could give him three little beauty rolls when he sit, it just scared him. He weighed 145lbs with 5' 5". He has been training since his fifteen, and he has never got a muscular body, but at least he remained fit. He desired to have a six pack, but indeed he had a softy belly who remained there, mostly, but Luca's habits. He could eat easily three full dishes at lunch and just 15 minutes later be hungry again. He eat for two, and also he eat a lot of greasy, fattening and unhealthy foods that then rested in his pinchable midsection. He was conscious about this, but he just can't do anything. He loved eating.

Back on that Monday, he prepared himself to the trip that would be the last one of his younghood with his parents. He has been becoming a man, and he has to become apart from some things. However, that trip will make him think twice some things, especially those around his eating habits...
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GainingLear 3 years
You might want to double check your pronouns. You change between his and her sometimes in the same sentence and referring to the same person.
GrowingLoveH... 3 years
Off to a good start. You write English well.