Big brother is watching

chapter 5

"Alright, I'm going to try to pull you out again now, okay Mia?" Danny whispered, setting the butter down on the floor, "and then we'll get you a nice breakfast."
"Okay," she whimpered. Danny had just rubbed her down with butter, and her enormous belly was glistening in the dim light. Danny's dad, Jonathon, was in the kitchen eating waffles, and Nancy had already left for work. Jonathon was checking their progress from time to time, laughing at the situation and offering less-than-helpful advice.
"So, did you get Miss Piggy out yet?" he called out, chuckling. Mia's face was flushed bright red, and with one last pull she slid free, her belly trembling.
"There she is! Come on, tubby, you want some waffles?" Jonathon cackled. Mia waddled up the stairs to her room as fast as she could, every inch of fat jiggling as she moved. Danny smirked as he watched her go. She was like putty in his hands, a fat, dumb little pet for him to play with.
"Mia's getting pretty heavy, isn't she?" Jonathon said, "She barely even leaves the house anymore."
"I know," Danny agreed, "She's just a fat, lazy pig these days. Nancy said she's putting her in fat camp."
"Ha. Good. That girl isn't gonna be young forever and no one wants to date a fat girl."
"Right," Danny chuckled, and then jogged up the stairs to his room. Mia had to stay fat. He needed a plan. He needed to keep her under control.
He sat on his bed and thought about her overstuffed belly and her chubby cheeks and the way her muffintop bulged out over her skintight sweatpants; he thought about the way she let him stuff her and convince her to overeat in public; and he was all smiles as he thought about how even when she was ballooning out of her clothes she still believed him when he said she wasn't fat. He started planning out how to keep her twisted around his pinkie finger while she was at fat camp.
What he wasn't planning on was Nancy coming home on her lunch break to take poor, chubby Mia away to fat camp only a few hours later.
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UKLionheart 6 months
I have just re-found this!

Perhaps to carry it on, you could show that the mother has misunderstood this particular "fat camp" The "lost causes" are the girls they take away to fatten further?
Necromancer3325 2 years
You should make the doctor get blackmailed by the step brother to make her fatter
Karenjenk 4 years
Wow... 2 years since the last comment. i like this
Karenjenk 4 years
Wow... 2 years since the last comment. i like this
Nicolas Eric 6 years
will it continue
Canderson206 7 years
Please continue! She needs to get so big that she's helpless and under the step brother's control.
Dreambig 7 years
oh god this is so dark and tasty
Beautybelly 7 years
fatten her up! smiley
Fantasyguy 7 years
Oh excellent - wonder what sort of diet Chris will put her on - and if Danny might try and secretly get in touch with his sister... or the camp...
Adoragordas124 7 years
Great story so far
I would love to see her get stuck on a chair or (if she gets really big) a doorway, that would be amazing
Nok 7 years
Agree with eponymous. Also, some details of things mentioned, her drunken admission, him starting her gain, etc, would be cool. Good start. Reminds me of a more relatable version of Wicked Stepfather.
Eponymous 7 years
withdrawn and insecure, so that she starts to rely on him more and more.
Eponymous 7 years
Have her brother make her humiliate herself in lots of small ways, not yet enough that she herself notices, but enough that people start teasing and talking behind her back. Perhaps he should do lots of small things to make his sister more whitdrawn and i
Eponymous 7 years
Very nice!
Some suggestions: introduce us to the mother, show us what he's done to her, how she reacts to her daughter's weight. Show us how the step-sister's handling it all, just how much she's fallen under her brother's spell.
Have her brother make h
Beautybelly 7 years
love it!! smiley