Big brother is watching

chapter 6

"Mia, welcome. Here at Cat and Mouse Bootcamp, we believe fitness starts with hard work and diet, yes, but also acceptance of your problem. Do you accept your weight problem, Mia?" the instructor asked, her sharp tone sounding harsh. Her name was Kara, and she was toned and muscular wearing shorts and a sports bra to show off her eight-pack.
"Yes ma'am," Mia whimpered. Her mother had just dropped her off after signing a few papers, and had even turned down the tour offer. She knew nothing about the program that they ran, only that they had a coupon in her morning newspaper for a six-month boarding.
"Good. You're a fat little porker, aren't you, Mia?" Kara sneered, flipping her blonde ponytail over her shoulder.
"I-"
"Say yes. Say, 'yes, Kara, I'm a fat little porker'. Say it!" Kara snapped.
"No, I-"
"Wrong answer, tubbs. Ten situps, right now, let's go!"
Mia laid down, her belly spilling out under her shirt. She couldn't even do one situp, her muscles had been out of use for so long. Tears came to her eyes as she struggled, and it began to set in how big she'd really gotten.
"What's wrong, fatty? You can't even do one situp? That's hilarious. Guess we have to send you to our specialist. Get up, we're gonna see just how greedy you are."
Mia struggled to get up, and then followed Kara to a small building, her chubby face red and dripping with sweat.
"Sit your big bum down in this chair and wait for him to come get you. Good luck, fatty," Kara smirked, giving Mia's belly a couple of rough slaps. She left Mia alone, ponytail swinging.
"Who's this round little piggy they brought me?" came a voice. Mia's head snapped up and she saw a young man, probably mid-twenties, with dark hair and piercing green eyes that made her insides flutter.
"My name is Mia," she replied, heart racing.
"Well, well, well. Mia. You definitely need my help, don't you, darling? That blubbery gut is just too much for you to keep track of on your own, is it? My name is Chris, and Kara only sends me the fatties that she thinks are a lost cause. Too fat for her to deal with. But you.. You are the roundest little girl I've seen in a while. And I run a fat camp, remember? Let's see your tummy, lift that shirt up for me."
Mia did as he asked, her belly spilling out onto her lap.
"Oh, look at this belly," he murmured, caressing the rolls of fat, "What a gluttonous little piggy you are. So round and overfed. And this button! So deep and soft."
"Oh.." Mia gasped as he stuck his thumb deep into her bellybutton and wiggled it, making her gut shake. He kept his thumb there, then grabbed a handful of her underbelly, squeezing the blubber as though it was a handle.
"We'll start with a diet," Chris announced, "and then we'll see what happens to you."

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UKLionheart 6 months
I have just re-found this!

Perhaps to carry it on, you could show that the mother has misunderstood this particular "fat camp" The "lost causes" are the girls they take away to fatten further?
Necromancer3325 2 years
You should make the doctor get blackmailed by the step brother to make her fatter
Karenjenk 4 years
Wow... 2 years since the last comment. i like this
Karenjenk 4 years
Wow... 2 years since the last comment. i like this
Nicolas Eric 6 years
will it continue
Canderson206 7 years
Please continue! She needs to get so big that she's helpless and under the step brother's control.
Dreambig 7 years
oh god this is so dark and tasty
Beautybelly 7 years
fatten her up! smiley
Fantasyguy 7 years
Oh excellent - wonder what sort of diet Chris will put her on - and if Danny might try and secretly get in touch with his sister... or the camp...
Adoragordas124 7 years
Great story so far
I would love to see her get stuck on a chair or (if she gets really big) a doorway, that would be amazing
Nok 7 years
Agree with eponymous. Also, some details of things mentioned, her drunken admission, him starting her gain, etc, would be cool. Good start. Reminds me of a more relatable version of Wicked Stepfather.
Eponymous 7 years
withdrawn and insecure, so that she starts to rely on him more and more.
Eponymous 7 years
Have her brother make her humiliate herself in lots of small ways, not yet enough that she herself notices, but enough that people start teasing and talking behind her back. Perhaps he should do lots of small things to make his sister more whitdrawn and i
Eponymous 7 years
Very nice!
Some suggestions: introduce us to the mother, show us what he's done to her, how she reacts to her daughter's weight. Show us how the step-sister's handling it all, just how much she's fallen under her brother's spell.
Have her brother make h
Beautybelly 7 years
love it!! smiley