Munchies:
Sounds like it won't be long before he hits 200 lbs. How big are you hoping he'll become?

Angy523:
I would say 220-230

Munchies:
As things are now, he'll be there by at least summer 2023. Maybe sooner.

Angy523:
This could've been accurate if it didn't take that long to accomodate with his new weight. But he felt the need to stop gaining or to diet a few times (it didn't last long, but it was enough to slow down the gaining) so he is just around 210 right now.

Nothing bad about it, there is no hurry and I want him to feel good about his weight. Probably he will lose some weight this summer since we have plans to do some sports together (I want to take care if his physical and mental health as well and I know he likes sports) and I expect him to eat less because of the heat. Or maybe not, idk exactly how his body works. In my case, I don't eat too much during summer and my appetite decrease when it's hot outside, but from what I saw last summer, it's not the same for him. But we'll see. I'll make sure he has enough good food to eat if he wants, but I won't push anything.

I expect him to be around 200 by the end of the summer and to gain some weight after that. Maybe to hit 220 by the end of the year.

Letters And Numbers:
Thanks everyone for the honest feedback, on the story and on the format of a monthly story club/book club. Trying something new!

Bellyempire:
Hello Everyone

I appreciate the feedback everyone has given. I am thankful that everyone took the time to read and to think about what I wrote and form an opinion about it. Thats flattering for any writer.

I will add another point of reference from which to provide criticism to the work. What if the author was a POC.

Please continue providing your feedback.

Plokool6:
Hi! It’s my girlfriend’s birthday soon, and I’m looking to get her one or two feederism related gifts as she’s my feedee (on top of non feederism gifts don’t worry lol).

I’d really appreciate any suggestions, thank you!

Munchies:
I will admit that I couldn't read it. This is a dense text block, and my eyes kept sliding off the page.

When you make a story, don't be afraid to use space. It allows your eyes to rest and better process whatever you see.

A general rule of thumb is to separate paragraphs with a line of space - much as I do in my response. The same thing goes with dialog. When another character starts talking - or the dialog ends - create a new line of space.

If a chapter has multiple scenes, I like to separate the scenes with a line break or multiple lines of space.

Letters And Numbers:
I think that’s great advice, especially for online writing where you can’t indent paragraphs. I do it myself.

It’s a cool story, though, that I think really captures the feel of a woman who gains confidence and becomes empowered by being fed by her partner. There’s some nice back and forth power dynamic, but it swings back to the protagonist at the end. I liked seeing a POC protagonist in a WG story also.

I definitely wouldn’t be afraid to go back in and add some spaces between paragraphs or give it a once over for word choice, but nice story!

Sjd8763:
Has anyone had any luck trying to gain more just in certain areas, instead of wherever the fat happens to go? I want my weight gain to start going more to my butt, hips and thighs instead of just to my belly. I've considered waist trainers but with as much belly as I already have, I kind of think that will just end up giving me a bigger lower paunch. A bigger apron belly doesn't sound terrible 😏 But I'd really like to direct things towards my behind if at all possible! Thanks for any suggestions!

Chipperpansy:
Lots of people find size differences between partners a bit weird, but I've found it to be appealing. I'd say it's psychological. As a very small person, fatter and taller people give me a sense of comfort and protection, plus it's hot thinking about how someone could easily overpower you. I'm sure at least some people relate (I'm new here, so I'm not sure what all people are into on this platform).

Anjou:
My fiancé wants to do a rapid gain before our wedding in October. He really had no health issues from his 50lb gain over a few weeks last fall he told me last night (which was confirmed by his annual checkup, but the wheezing and heavy breathing he did made me afraid af for him at the time he was drinking over a quart of cream a day)and seems to really becoming more of a gainer again(but with healthy food like nuts and whole grains) since I went on Wegoy after we got engaged in April and am really getting thin for the first in my life. And since we are both really getting turned on by the contrast, I might ok a rapid summer weight gain with heavy cream

RoundRosy:
Had to buy a top today that I tore when trying on….. This only happened once before when I was like 14. Woman working the area said something to me like I should keep the top for when I lose a few pounds. And had a smirky smile as she said that. I quickly left and dropped the top in a collection bin. Then got McDonald’s in the way home…..