Fat is beautiful (rough draft)

Chapter 2 - (part one)

The sleek spacecraft Luna Moth was oddly graceful even as it plummeted. As fortune would have it, the ship was now within the gravity field of the cerulean sphere that was the planet Demeter-12. The ship's inhabitants weren't sure which would be a worse fate: drifting aimlessly through the endless void of space with the ship's power waning, and therefore any hope of rescue in equally short supply; or the very real prospect of obliteration if they crashed into the surface of the planet below. It was the latter scenario that now seemed more likely to play out, as the ship was descending rapidly, and barring some miracle, within decaseconds they would surely wipe out.

Daesti Derecho and her traveling companion, Lina Lazuli, had cruised through myriad star systems, but their leisurely cross-galactic trip had just come, they now feared, to an abrupt halt. All their glorious plans were now on hold: skinny-dipping in the azure ocean of Kepler-226; hiking through the rocky foothills of Tartarus-15b; wild pub-crawls in the space city of New Drogheda; and other escapades yet to be determined.

"Losing altitude," intoned a synthesized voice in the cockpit. Meanwhile, an alarm from the ship's main console began to breedle loudly and insistently.

"Drokk it!" yelled Lina, pounding a control panel with her fists. "What a way to cut short our vacation!"

They were within the upper atmosphere of the planet Demeter-12 and now the Luna Moth was in a near-nosedive, apparently plunging toward the vast open ocean. But as the ship pierced the dense clouds, they could just make out some sort of landmass.

"We'll never make it to Corus Sigma," said Daesti, referring to their anticipated destination, where they had intended to dock their ship for routine maintenance and take in some of that port's famous nightlife--until this recent spate of bad luck befell them.

Daesti, ever imperturbable, checked a reading on the console. "Lucky for us, navicomputer says we're in the airspace of an island-city. Our mayday beacon's on."

A voice came over the communicator.

"This is Fatropolis air control tower. State your emergency."

Lina and Daesti shot each other an incredulous glance. "Fatropolis?" stage-whispered Lina. "You've got to be kidding me."

Daesti smirked but put a finger to her lips to shush her friend. "This is the Luna Moth, compact recreational craft, crew of two. Our engine's malfunctioning and our battery's low. Requesting interception and permission to land for repairs."

"Permission granted. Dispatching rescue pods to bring you safely in. Prepare for interception."
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2seatsalways 9 months
If you ever do continue this, this could be a masterpiece for the ages. Definitely a movie in your mind with this story
Derp666 1 year
Love this story! Please though, i'm begging you, Daesti needs a chapter!
Tobbyrea 1 year
Thank you for the story
Tobbyrea 1 year
I enjoyed the new installment. Please can we have another soon
The Augmentor 1 year
New installment posted!
The Augmentor 4 years
Tobbyrea and Lyn: Thanks for the good words! And thanks for your patience between installments!
Tobbyrea 4 years
Love the story looking forward to the next chapter
Tobbyrea 5 years
Love the story keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter
Knightorder 6 years
This story is amazing! Shame a city like this doesn't actually exist. Hope to see more parts soon!
Waxer 6 years
Although I'm not sure my soul can take another wait like the last one. smiley Not that I want you to rush to give an abridged finish, keep up the amazing work, but Is there anything we can do to help?
Waxer 6 years
My heart did a flip when I saw this with new installments Keep up the amazing work!
The Augmentor 6 years
Absolutely! I should have the next installment ready to post sometime in early December, so please keep checking back. Glad you're enjoying the story so far.
TalulahJay 6 years
are you gonna keep going with this one? I’m a big fan
Eponymous 6 years
Nice to see this on here again. I've been keeping up with it on DA for a while now. I love the slow pace and the attention paid to the setting. It's got a wonderful sort of pulpish, comic book sci-fi feel to it. Kinda reminds me of the old Dirty Pair anim
Rickeb 6 years
I know there are many more chapters after they reach minimum regulation weight to become optimum weight. I look forward to them becoming the pride of Fatropolis!
Rickeb 6 years
great story so far. I for one would like to know what the minimum regulation weigh is to leave the Fattenarium,and how fat they have to become to reach optimum weight as estimated by WIDE-AS?
The Augmentor 6 years
Thank you for the kind words! Glad you're enjoying the story.
Karenjenk 6 years
I love this. It is my new favorite story here. I love the delayed growth... or domination. At the same time you give us the very thing that we come here for her.

11 out of 10

;-)
The Augmentor 6 years
All parts are posted now, right up to the current installment. Please keep checking back for more. Enjoy!
The Augmentor 1 year
Well, after nearly three years, I've finally got a new installment posted!