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chapter 1 cont

"Wow thanks!" Becca hardly waited a moment to dig in. She hoped it was as good as the éclair, and she was not disappointed. The cookie was chewy and sweet. "I could get used to this."
More cars started to pull in and Becca was pulled from her moment with the cookie.
"This town is taking to us real well. How about it, do you think you can handle the job."
"No problem ma'am," Becca said proudly. "I've got this."
For the rest of the day, Becca worked the window and enjoyed a "small" snack here and there. Tracy would drop off a donut or a cookie. Always something new and Becca just could not wait to try it. By the end of the day, she was a pro at the drive thru.
"Well that's it girls!" Tracy yelled out as she shut the doors. "I don't know how I can thank you, you have been a great help. We will be starting early tomorrow. I know school will be starting soon but if I can have you guys here for the morning rush it would be great."
"No problem auntie, our classes don't start until 8:30 anyways so we can help out till then."
"I will have you guys I the system and paid for today, but here each of you take one of hese for the hard work." Tracy handed Liz and Becca a pie each. They were lemon meringue with a large helping of meringue on top.
Liz laughed, "Uh thanks, maybe my mom and sis will want some."
Becca looked it over, "Me too, boy will my mom be surprised."
The girls headed home. Becca and Beth chatted about the wonderful food at the restaurant. Liz couldn't help but notice the slight bulge from her friends belly.
"Better slow down with the snacking though Becca, you don't want to get too big before school starts. I hear Michael has been looking your way lately."
"Oh I'll be fine Liz, you just don't know how good it was."
Becca walked home and saw her mother. She had been working on her computer all day.
"Hi Rebecca, what do you have there?"
"A job." Rebecca told her mom about her day, and her new job a McFaddens.
Well that's good honey, plus you get to work with your friends. So, lets try some of that pie."
Rebecca set the pie on the table and grabbed some plates and forks. She served her mom a slice, and then herself. The meringue was firm and jiggly. She took a bite and it was so sweet and the lemon a perfect sour to mix. Rebecca and her mother savored every bite. They talked more about each other's day enjoying the pie as they went on. Neither of them noticed the fact that after they had finished the pie on their plates, the began to eat directly from the tin. Their forks crossed at one point bringing the two out of their stupor.
"Oh lord, did we just eat that whole thing. It was just so good."
"I told you mom, and now I am exhausted I have to go to bed. I have to go to work tomorrow."
Becca went up to her room, as her mother scraped the last bits of the pie. Rebecca caught a glimpse of herself in her mirror. She noticed the small bulge of her belly. It was hard and full from her day of snacking. Rather than feel disgusted, she instead moved to her bed, rubbing her stomach, and thought over each and ever delicacy she had tasted that day. The flavors played over in her head and on her tongue as she slowly drifted off to sleep.
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Tommmy 4 years
Will you ever continue this great story?
Tommmy 5 years
I just read the new chapters. Wonderful. I’m so happy that you’re continuing this. I can’t wait to see the HUGE DEVELOPMENTS of what happens to everybody in this town as time goes bye. This is The best story on Fantasy Feeder, by far.
Tommmy 5 years
Hi welcome back. Thank you for continuing it. We missed you ! Glad you’re ok
Jenemc 5 years
In the first chapter you changed one of the characters names. Jessica originally but changed to liz. Minor error smiley
Beerstein 5 years
New chapters are up, a bit of a prequal and a bit of what could be. Let me know what you think.
Tommmy 5 years
I truly hope beer stein returns to fantasy theater and continues the story. It has such fantastic HUGE potential
Tommmy 6 years
This can’t be the end of the story???? Can it?
Tommmy 6 years
This is such a great story !! I just hope there’s more to come. It’s been a few weeks. I just hope this isnt one of those stores that never gets finished.
It has tremendous potential. One of the best on fantasy feeder
Tommmy 6 years
I just finished chapter 10. oh my God !, I love the way you write ! I love the way Tracey thinks about making them huge fat slobs. way they will eventually dress the way they will become heavy drinkers, etc... so HOT
I can’t wait for more chap
Akwolfgrl13 6 years
This is amazing!!!!!!!!#
Tommmy 6 years
This keeps getting better. Thanks for continuing it !
Yindy 6 years
PHENOMENAL!!!!

I really loved how Beth took control and became was too kissed out, and I want Tracy and tony to successfully fatten up everyone.
Tommmy 6 years
This is one of THE BEST stories I have read in a while. I love all of the weight gain detail and how they are changing. I love Tracy’s BIG PLANS for them. I look forward to more chapters.
THANK YOU for writing this...
Theswordsman 6 years
Love the story and cant wait to see how Tracy's plan unfolds.
Beerstein 6 years
Thank you everyone, check in nightly for new chapters.
Leedle Lee 6 years
Brilliant story so far. Keep it up.
Tommmy 6 years
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. The first 7 chapters are amazing!! Please continue it very soon. I think Tracy has BIG,BIG, HUGE, FAT plans for them all.
Jazzman 6 years
I like this.I would point out that very few 5'8" girls in this day or any day weigh 115.Usually 135 minimum.Just sayin.
I just figured out the last paragraph and it is Pure Genius! Please keep going!