Marriage suits you, mr jones...and mrs jones...

chapter 5

Tim did not know what exactly was happening. As far as he was concerned, marriage was not going to get in the way of him enjoying life. He was still going to have affairs. He was still going to go out clubbing.
However, he did not get as many invites as he used to.
Not to worry, his new wife would enjoy having him at home more.
He still looked amazing, even if he did say it himself. He was still trim. His clothes still fit. He didn't skimp on grooming products.
He could not help blowing himself a kiss in the mirror as he turned away and picked up a can of Coke. The drank the whole lot down in one go, left the can on the dresser and gave a big burp as he headed out to work. It was already his second can of the day.

Madeleine was engineering everything about his life with fine precision. She was turning down invites, encouraging him to eat at home instead of eating out. When he did stay at home, she rewarded him, not just with fantastic sex, but she introduced him to desserts. His newly acquired sweet tooth made him look forward to the little delicacies. But, at present that was all they were. A few mouthfuls of sweetened pleasure.
At weekends, she stopped him attending sporting events in favour of having some time alone with his wife.
Instead, she allowed him to watch on TV and made sure he had plenty crisps to snack on while he watched.
She made him big, filling dinners at the weekends. He complained that he felt too full afterwards, but she did not listen. Next time she made sure he received an even bigger portion.
She made more tweaks with his everyday meals. She'd been placing his low fat yoghurts in a plastic bowl for work so that he did not have to eat out of the carton, which was 'uncouth'. Now she replaced the low fat or no fat yoghurt for 'extra creamy' ones. When he got used to that, she added more cream.
These changes were definitely starting to have a cumulative effect. The buttonholes on his standard fit shirts were starting to gape. His trousers were tighter. He was wearing his belt on a bigger hole. His muscles were less defined, hidden by a thin layer of fat.
She bought him new clothes in a larger size before he started to complain.
She encouraged him to go to the gym less often. He didn't need to be super fit any more.
He complied with everything she 'suggested' he did.
She turned up the pressure, persuaded him never to leave any food on his plate and to ask for more, if he was still hungry.
Later, she substituted the words 'not full' for 'hungry'.
She watched him grow a tiny paunch after every big meal. She loved to see how tight it made his shirt look and how he squirmed trying to find more room for another can of Coke.
Every day she was loving him more.
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Comments

Chrysophase2003 7 years
I'm a bit rusty writing rather than editing, but if you're serious I'll consider it. I tend plot-driven rather than relationship-driven work, so the handoff would be obvious. Still, I can think of a few things to do with it.
Aquarius64 7 years
This story is finished. I have already dragged it on longer than I intended. I have nothing else to add creatively, but Why don't you do an ad-endum if you like it so much?
Aquarius64 7 years
Chrystophase 2003. She is not focussed on escaping. She thinks about escaping, but never does the deed because she is enjoying the food and lifestyle too much.
Whenever you have a choice to make, do you not have a debate going on in your own head? Often,
Chrysophase2003 7 years
Question: Why is the female protagonist so focused on escaping the facility when their goals coincide with hers?
Chrysophase2003 7 years
Unhealthy, immobile, and tube fed. It's right up my alley, but please don't stop now!
Ohirish 7 years
Please keep going!!!
Aquarius64 7 years
Minor tweaks made
Aquarius64 7 years
She was going to make him immobile and then cruelly leave him. Do you prefer the ending I have written instead?
Aquarius64 7 years
Even I was not expecting that ending and I was writing it!
Growrnshowr 7 years
Pure brilliance! Am loving it! Can you update us his weight more often in the story, please?
Giantjay 7 years
Very much enjoying this!
FrecherTyp 7 years
a lovely story ^^
Growingsofter 7 years
Awesome story and pace.
Aquarius64 7 years
The computer game character referenced in chapter 8 is, I think, palmer from final fantasy vii. He is one of the shinra executives in rocket town.
Hurgon 7 years
Awesome. Can't wait for more!
Built4com4t 7 years
Sorry, cant wait :-)
Aquarius64 7 years
I'm still creating. Not reading for reading yet