an adventure in the woods

Chapter 1 - a walk in the park

LOVE IS IN THE AIR, the spring was coming, two shapes ran across the forest with an unusual aura, true happiness.
Hansel and Gretel couldn't be happier, they recently got engaged and they wanted to be sure they commemorated that.
They lived across the street and yet took so long to notice eachother, when they did, their destiny was traced.
Hansel was tall, accustomed to work in the fileds he easily carried his love on his back while they laughed trough the forest.
Gretel on the other hand was small compared to her lover, but she might one day realise that if she meets one of the girls from down south she would still tower above all of them.
Unlike Hansel she never had to work, her parents could live by with the bakery business, her heart was on books.

Spring shouldn't be coming so soon you know? - said Gretel thinking out loud.
I don't care when it comes, I'm with you and that's all that matters.

She blushed upon hearing this and tightened her grip around his neck.

They soon reached the shore of a lake, Hansel gently putting her down, they sat by the grass and watched the ducks swimming toghehter.

I love you... - I love you too Gretel.

The afternoon was perfect, and the grass seemed so cozy, they could have stayed there forever, but Hansel stood up and told her
So? Should we set up shop here?


A PICNIC LIKE NO OTHER followed, the huge basket Gretel had been carrying on her hand was emptied and all was laying there in front of them. Pastries, sandwiches, cheese, even some wine bottles Hansel took the liberty of taking from his parent's pantry.

Threy say there, mouth watering, looking at all the food, waiting for the other to make a move.
Hansel has always been the brave one, he picked a piece of cake and ate it whole, he took another one and gave it to his lover, who welcomed it with her mouth wide open.
The ritual carried on, being so close to each other made them more and more invested, it was getting rough.

Hansel was losing control, not giving Gretel time to even chew, kissing her wildly whenever she did a rare break.
Soon the cake was gone, and Gretel was feeling it's effect, she was starting to feel drowsy, and had to rest her now sluggish body on Hansel.

Hansel on the other hand was also in a sorrow state, after making quick work of the wine he was starting to see double, wich for him, meant double the food, and he stuffed himself as such.

Remembering Gretel was right next to him, he grabbed all the last cookies and cupcakes, and turned his attention to his sleepy lover.
She was incapable of resisting him and his kisses, and found herself being pushed way to far beyond her maximum.
Her shirt was already slightly raised, giving way to all the food that now inhabited her stomach.

Hansel liked what he was seeing, and quickly rolled with her until he was standing on top of her, Gretel was enjoying this turn of events and caressed his face and chest, they embraced eachother and let their desires loose.
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Piturekapiteka 3 years
A small update

The story is not finished yet, I'm trying to finish it but I'm in the last year of my masters degree and assignments are popping up like crazy and I barely have time to focus on other things. I also had a small block but I think I have
Dramaqueen2905 4 years
Gretel gaining stalkholm syndrome would be nice, I also think the witch gaining another male to impregnate Gretel, and fatten up would be hot; as the story line progresses the witch would feed and feel the child (pg way thank you) in-front of Gretel. That
Jacobbanana265 4 years
Awww so sad Hansel died 😭
Sutherngent96 5 years
This just might be one of if not the best Hansel and Gretel stories ive ever read. Keep it up this is awesome
Clubkong 5 years
It’s a great take on H&G . Awesome story so far !
Piturekapiteka 5 years
Hey guys, so this is my first and maybe only attempt at a story, at the time of this comment there are 4 chapters, each comprising of several smaller parts, 7 more chapters are probably still coming, but it might take a bit longer than expected