Currently untitled vampire weight gain story (work in progress)

chapter 2 (unfinished)

THIS CHAPTER IS MISSING A TRANSITION AND THEN IT WILL BE DONE

Chapter Two


Rachel woke to her phone blaring. She picked it up and saw it was Thorin. She smiled to herself and answered. "Hey."

"Hey. Can you come out?"

"Why?"

"I miss you."

She could feel heat rush to her face but smiled. "Okay."

She threw back the covers and put her sweatshirt on. It had gotten coarse through multiple washes in the machine.

She slipped outside to find Thorin under a streetlight.

He beckoned for her to come to him and she did.

He embraced her tiny body in his arms. "Hello my dear," he said smoothly.

"Hi. What's up?" She asked.

"Are you okay?" He sounded worried.

"Yeah...why?"

He glanced down. "Everything I see online...your mother…"

Rachel's cheeks burned as tears sprang to her eyes. "It's not true," she managed to say.

He tilted her chin up to look at him. "I'm well aware. Why don't you come home with me tonight and we can get your mind off your mother?"

"How so?"

A cocky grin turned up the right corner of his mouth. "I was hoping I could pleasure you."

"Oh! But I've never done that…"

"I know," he said softly. "I want to give this to you...as a gift. I think you need some excitement."

Rachel snorted. "Sex is that good?"

He pulled her close and hovered his hand above her crotch. Her whole body trembled as she could feel his fingers inches away from her most personal space.

"Would you like me to prove my point?"

She shook as her insides began twisting in frustration.

"Yes," she uttered breathlessly.

He gently ran his hand along the inside of her thigh tracing the bone. He circled the inside of her groin.

He withdrew his hand and asked, "how was that?"

"Yes," was all she could manage to say.

"You would allow me to pleasure you tonight?"

"Yes," she replied, her whole body quivering.

They went to his place and he tossed her on the bed. He tore her shirt open to reveal a plain white bra. Rachel's face flushed with embarrassment. "You're stunning," he said as he took off her pants.

She helped wiggle out of them.

He took off off his pants, exposing his large cock. "I'm not going to hurt you," he said caressing her.

He ran his fingers between her thighs and slipped them inside her. His fingers slid around her easily and once he knew she was relaxed he positioned his dick over her. "Ready?" he asked.

"Yes!" she cried out.

He gently eased his way in, moving in and out, the friction sending electrical impulses through them both.

Rachel's head was spinning with pleasure and yet a whisper of shame kept nagging her. She ignored it and clung to him, moving her hips to the rythem of his body.

As things were winding down he grabbed her jaw and held it firmly making her look at him.

"I love you," he said.

"I love you too," she replied a wide, brilliant smile stretching across her face.

He nuzzled her neck. "Do you know I would never hurt you?" He asked.

"Yes..." she said confused.

"I need to be honest about something."

"What is it?"

He pulled back and elongated his fangs so she could clearly see them.

She sucked in a lung full of air and recoiled. But then relaxed. All she could see was the man she loved. She silently prayed it would stay that way.

"Can I have you? Can I keep you?" He asked.

Rachel bit her lip. “What does that mean?”

“It means you would be mine. Forever. If a vampire bites a human during intercouse on a full moon they become bonded. Please? I want you. I want you away from your bitch of a mother. This would also make you immortal.”

“Okay,” she said quietly.

He was very quick about it. He turned her head and sunk his teeth into her neck. He had to be careful because she was very boney.

She yelped and would have jumped if it hadn't been for him holding her firmly in place.

He stroked her hair to soothe her as he drained her blood, keeping careful tabs on her pulse.

She was soon unconscious.
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Theswordsman 4 years
Don't burn it i find too intriguing i do think the characters need more descriptions and i would like to know thier back stories but so far so good.
BBWcreator82 4 years
Show more, tell less. More emotion and descriptions. Ditch the prologue and turn it into chapter one.

Good luck.