The deal - updated

Chapter 1 - the deal updated

Hi there,

A few months ago I posted a story about Jenn and Russell (see the story's basic premise above). I promised to keep people updated as and when I added more to it.

The updated story can be found here:

http://fantasyfeeder.com/cms/infusion s/stories/view.php?id=6208

(or just check out the 'stories' section of my profile)

I have added about 10 extra pages - so if you enjoyed reading it last time around I hope you will enjoy the latest instalments. If you haven't looked at the story in a while you probably left it at about pages 18 to 19.

Anyway, I hope to complete the story over the New Year but I would be interested to know what people think and whether or not it still reads okay - and as always - happy to take criticism on board.

Hope you enjoy it. And thanks for reading!

Best wishes,
Little Extra.

P.S. Sorry about the lines and stars that appear below. I had to include them as this note wouldn't publish without them (as FF has a minimum character requirement for story updates).


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Comments

FrecherTyp 9 years
hmmm a really sexy story and very full of love and good writing ;-) i would love to meet a girl in real life to play such games with the whole rest of my life ^^
Littleextra 10 years
The note above isn't the actual updated story.

The story itself can be found here - http://fantasyfeeder.com/cms/infusions/stories/view.php?id=6208
Buckleyheath 10 years
Where'd the story go?! All I see is lines and stars?
Littleextra 10 years
Thank you! smiley
Gainerfan1 10 years
Well done sir, new chapters are super hot!