The life of a millionaire

Chapter 3 - the buffet

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--------------------------------------Jack and Max went and got new clothes. Jack insisted on buying bigger sizes, just in case. They also got some for Sam. Max thought that they would be going back home, but Jack stopped by some restaurant.
"What is this place?" Max asked.
"It's the restaurant I own. It's all you can eat. It's usually really slow in the morning. It's open, but no one comes. It's really busy at night though. I thought I'd take you in a try the food it out. All the foods are made with my recipes. You'll like it Max. Trust me," Jack said. Max didn't know hat to say, but he was excited to eat the food.
Max sat down while Jack went and got his food. He came back with cheeseburgers, chicken strips, sandwiches, pastas, and pizzas. They all looked so good and Max stuffed his face.
He finished the meal and rubbed his tummy. Jack came back and gave him dessert. He brought ice cream, doughnuts, and milkshakes. Max finished it all, even though he was full, and finally, his dad gave him a beer.
They went back home and Max gave Sam his new clothes. Sam didn't notice that Max pigged out in a buffet, since he wore a bigger size. Sam had been working out all morning, and the clothes barely fit him, so he just stuck with the ones he was wearing.
Max went back down to the living room, where he grabbed a bag of chips and started watching tv. He looked at his fat and smiled, thinking about the other things he's going to eat with his ad. It was almost like his dad was trying to make him fat on purpose. He ate the bag of chips, and surprisingly was still hungry. He went to the pantry and got some kettle corn and munched on that for a while and was really happy since he had a nice stuffed belly. The twins had a decent sized lunch (Max ate a lot more than Sam) and went to bed with full bellies. It was soon the day was the day of the fair that his father owned. He couldn't wait to go to see what his father had plans were.
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Aquarius64 5 years
I’m sorry, I didn’t enjoy this story. I could only get as far as chapter six. It is too disjointed. That might be because you took such big breaks in between writing chapters and this had interrupted your flow of ideas.
I usually write a short story in a
Maximj 8 years
Great story!
Maximj 8 years
Great story!
Swa 8 years
Please continue, great story!
Jens01 8 years
a new food competition, yes all for max ..........
Jens01 8 years
yes max a sexy winner smiley make max drunk.....and horny
Chub41ub 8 years
It's a great start & I like where things are going, but I must agree with Slmbalato- the constant name & role changing was really confusing & the flip-flopping between past & present tense made my head spin. Once you get some editing down, this story can
Jens01 8 years
yes more food and beer allday please .....soo good for sexy boys
Nathel112 8 years
It's great can't wait for more!!