Imp tales

chapter 20: who

McPorky's (late night)

I arrived at one of my favourite establishments. The smell of rich and overly fattening food filled my sense, even before my skin tingled at the moderate gluttony hugged my senses.

This restaurant was the join work of many demons in the city. Although my role in its creation was minor, I loved this place. You see any mortal that ate here became very easy to affect with our dark gifts, and any under dark gifts would feel the need to come here if they were nearby.

I decided to sit at the bar and make small talk with the few other demons who had decided to pick targets for the evening. After swaping some minor stories, I sensed a gluttonous urge throb from the entrance. My senses stir, expecting to see a blimp of a human. I turned with excitement, but seen Vicky's friend Ashley. Taken back slightly and scanning deeper. I wasn't wrong, since I last took a deep look into her, food had become her source of comfort, addiction and sexual trigger.

I watched her go and order, my demonic nature driving more then my personality. I watched her drive into her sin. She was still in her yoga suit. I watches her attack her food and sensed her urges. They weren't that strong, but her will power was paper thin. 'I want her' the thought popped into my mind.

Then with a tap to the back of my head I was brought back to reality, "you still listening runt?", came the voice beside me. The voice and the hand that hit me belonged to Brodden. Brodden was also an imp, however, unlike most our kin, which tended to be smaller then average human, Brodden was huge. He stood nearly 7 feet tall, and had a jaw large enough to almost fit two watermelons in. And almost as wide as that many men. His large gut hid his unnatural strength. As his expensive suit did a good job hiding his poor attitude.

"Of course", I lied. Other then Brodden owning 60% of this place, I couldn't care if he was still breathing, even less about what he was bragging about. My eyes were glued to the endless gluttony of Ashley across the room. She was stuffed, her tight belly showing just a sliver of flesh.

"I don't think you heard what I said Runt. That girl is mine. I spotted her this morning.", grumbled Brodden.

Normally I would back down from Brodden, I blame my dark nature for what I said, "No Brodden, I seen her weeks ago and have been working hard on her."

It's unfortunate that Brodden's reply was to smash a chair over the back of my head. When I awoke later, the bar had closed, and a scribbled note was on my face.

'don't worry runt. I won't make her take too long before she's too dark for you tastes.'
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Zurea 6 years
Love it! There's some minor spelling errors but the content is amazing and makes it easy to look past.
You have a good sense for writing, I look forward to the future installments.
GrowingLover 6 years
Looking at this fun interesting story so far, I'd wager that it is nearing the 45% in its journey as this is the secondary conflict to build up "Mark". As they say the bigger they are the harder they fall. Brodden being bigger and overly confident in his
Hellofang2000 6 years
No update yet. Rereading and planning to start again soon.
Nicolas Eric 6 years
any updates for some reason this poped up as new
Akwolfgrl13 6 years
Very nice
Hellofang2000 8 years
@martim92 - not at all. Just been very busy trying to find time to write the Las few weeks. More to come.
Martim92 8 years
This is the ending?
Hellofang2000 8 years
Thank you. I will keep that in mind the next time a scene like that arises.
Jahmescohen 8 years
you should try doing body descriptions with her weigh ins, or her fittings, they'd go together perfectly... aside from that, this story is pretty good
Hellofang2000 8 years
Re: plumpsoftkitty

Yim hellofang2000
PlumpSoftKitty 8 years
Won't let me message any more today. Any other way to chat?
PlumpSoftKitty 8 years
Can not wait for more smiley
Moonsilk 8 years
More please
Hellofang2000 8 years
Thank you for feedback. Will try and clean up spelling mistakes later. Hopefully, much more to come.
Knightorder 8 years
I'm intrigued. Do go on.

(PS, there's a few minor spelling mistakes towards the end).