The fence

chapter 5- poolside

After leaving her room and walking to her back door, Alana stepped into the backyard and made her way to the oh-so-familiar wooden fence that stood between herself and her neighbor’s pool. Out of habit she walked to the loose plank. Sure enough, as Alana poked its side, the wooden beam revealed the gap in the fence that Alana had used to great effect in high school when dating Scott.

She could see the pool through the gap. She wanted nothing more than to squeeze though the beams of the tall wooden fence like in the old days, but she was forced to admit she’d never make it. The gap in the fence which had once looked inviting and spacious, now looked positively tiny.

Even though she knew the gap had stayed the same size, she had not. Ten years and 100 some pounds ago, she’d already be lounging by the pool, but now, she was forced to make herself a new weight loss goal. Fit through the fence again. Maybe, just maybe, she could fit if she managed to slide herself in on her side, but she wasn’t willing to try. That would be way too much effort.

Letting go of the plank and letting it slide back into place, Alana waddled along the side of the fence until she reached the front of her neighbor’s house. The gate was open as usual and Alana let herself in.

The pool was finally hers and Alana wasted no time in plopping her oversized butt down on a poolside lounge chair. She could feel her butt cheeks pinching out over the sides of the narrow recliner, but it was still more comfortable than she remembered. As she closed her eyes and took in the last bit of warm sunlight the summer day had to offer. Alana slowly drifted off into a dream.

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Comments

Captzae 1 year
Still gains unintentionally so when it goes to marriage he’s got more than enough reasons under his belt to why she loves him so much they get married, I’m not author I just really like that idea 😅
Captzae 1 year
The idea of her being different from most characters and not become accepting of the weight so easily so that way it gives room for Trevor to really make her feel loved even while she still gains,
Captzae 1 year
I’ve read all of your stories and I don’t know why but this one really is my favorite and I can’t wait for the sequel to the fence. I fee that Alana should continue to gain weight but I like the idea,
Polarisdreamer 3 years
@shesgonnnabehuge It might get a sequel one day!

@Yuri33 I am still thinking about it, one day I will probably write the sequel
Ellegirl 3 years
Why did it endddd smiley
Yuri33 4 years
It passed 3 months from this story, have you thought about a continious?
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Yuri33 no worries in that regard, Trevor is not a feeder and Alana is not a feedee
Yuri33 4 years
You got right! But if you continious with this masterpiece please dont fall in the usual story in which he is a feeder and she is a feede
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@Yuri33 I think that would be the perfect ending to their relationship, but they aren't quite there yet. Their relationship is still a secret, so first that bridge will have to be crossed.

Thanks for the feedback!
Yuri33 4 years
Se he love her and continious to spoil her!
What you say?
Its long time i dont read an amazing story like this on ff so thankyou!
Yuri33 4 years
You can go on with a marriage! After wedding alana can get more lazy and spoiled, trevor do little trying to motivate alana going into gym or going out for a run or a walk but alana is too lazy for this and continious grow fatter. Trevor accept this becou
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@saidence42 I won't rule out a longform rewrite eventually, it does sound like a fun challenge.

Thanks for the support! And thanks for the feedback! it means a lot to me!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@saidence42 I think the story would work very well in the longform, the only issue for me is the large time investment it would take to do it justice. I have other unfinished stories I want to finish before I do any more rewrites. I won't rule out a lon
Saidence42 4 years
I really loved 'Paul's Dilemma' so having this story with similar length arc would be amazing.

You're an amazing author with a true mastery over romance, pacing, and tension. I'll definitely be closely following your work.
Saidence42 4 years
I'd love to see a re-do of this story as an extended version that starts the same except instead of confessing/ falling in love straight away they slowly gravitate towards each other while Alana gets bigger.
FattyBoyy 4 years
Hey, I'm trying to write another chapter to my story. How do I do that I don't see an option for it.
Polarisdreamer 4 years
Rstlne, Thank you! Those are great ideas!
Rstlne 4 years
*Maybe Trevor tries to change that?
Rstlne 4 years
Yeah, I think you should continue.

Ideas:
- Telling the other side of the story with Noah and Stephanie
- Continuing the current story.
- Maybe Alana starts to lose weight for a while because she is no longer stressed. And maybe Trevor tries to ch
Rstlne 4 years
Still reading but enjoying it so far (:
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