A hefty heist

By Polarisdreamer

Chapter 60 - author's note

Listen to this chapter - just press play:

So ends "A Hefty Heist." Thanks for reading!

If you've enjoyed the story please leave a 'like' or a comment.

It will help ensure other people are able to find and read my writing, and it will help me to improve my craft for future stories I produce.

Some things I'd love to have some feedback on include:

Is there interest in me producing a sequel to this story? It would not be done for a while, (I have two larger stories I'd like to finish writing first, but I've already got it outlined) but I would like to know if there is interest for one.

What was your favorite chapter in this story? And what about it made it your favorite?

Who was your favorite character? And why?

Was there anything you enjoyed about this series overall? How might it be improved in a sequel?

Contemporary Fiction Humiliation/Teasing Feeding/Stuffing Sexual acts/Love making Addictive Competitive Enthusiastic Indulgant Romantic Female Straight Fit to Fat Friends/Roommates X-rated

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Uwu23 2 years

wow this has been one of the best stories I have read so far, will you ever release a sequel ?, since you left a very open ending, I really would like to know the outcome of this story

Hermanos 2 years

I love this story.

Sometimes, when I can't find any good story I come back to read this masterpiece.

Are you still going to make the sequel? Because I'd love to read it.

Fatowl 3 years

Fantastic story!! Could not put it down till I was done!! Suspenseful and like an action adventure. Good plot and character development.

Absolutely!! Do a sequel. Great cliff hanger. Maybe make Wallis a bad guy and have Bitch Lilly become a h

Polarisdreamer 4 years

@ClearSkyNZ Glad you enjoyed! I'm sure you will! It's taken me a long time to improve my craft, but as long as you work at it, you can do it!

ClearSkyNZ 4 years

This was an awesome story. You're a great writer! I'm definitely going to check out your next story. I can only hope to write something with as meaningful characters as you

Polarisdreamer 4 years

@trolheh I think you've hit the nail on the head with Taylor's fate. Although I might not focus the sequel on Taylor, her fate would certainly be included.

Thank you for all the support!

Polarisdreamer 4 years

@Godzilla That's a good idea. Her whole orientation toward gaining and sex has probably been irreversibly changed

Godzilla 4 years

Ellie compulsively eating without encouragement.

Polarisdreamer 4 years

@Sexypeggy Thanks for the feedback!

I think the word limit cut you off.

Polarisdreamer 4 years

@Tobbyrea thank you! What would you hope to see in a sequel?

@FigureBySnacks Thanks for the feedback! Great idea!

Sexypeggy 4 years

You are welcome

I really liked Ellie. a woman who has a good font and a good kind for it is friend.
a continuation would be good because one is attached to the various character.
and I really like the chapter or Ellie and very nourish. (can be

Tobbyrea 4 years

I really enjoyed the story hope for a sequel

Polarisdreamer 4 years

@fatchance Thank you very much! It is always motivating to hear that!

Fatchance 4 years

fantastic writing! love it!

Polarisdreamer 4 years

@Sexypeggy Thank you!

Sexypeggy 4 years

Very nice

Polarisdreamer 4 years

@Vulpix7 I think some of your comment got cut off by the word limit.

I think the descent into the gain is the strongest part of this story! Thanks!