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Chapter 3B - Kate

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Kate was having the worst week in recent memory. Having just broken up with her boyfriend, she was wallowing in a sea of abject misery. The college Junior couldn't believe how easy it was for everything to be thrown away in an instant. Kate and her now ex-boyfriend had dated for the entirety of their Sophomore years... and now.. everything was over. He was her first boyfriend too. Well.. her first normal boyfriend. Kate had an ex her age still at the college, but she didn't consider whatever their relationship had been, real. Her first ex had used her and made her feel used, like a piece of meat. That first relationship had been uncomfortable and Kate had been happy when she ended it. Now, yet another relationship ended, Kate had two exes on campus to avoid. A creep and a cheater. It fucking sucked to live in that reality, but here she was trying to deal with it.

Sanding at a short 5ft 1, Kate stripped and looked at herself in front of the mirror and wondered to herself. Was she that much less attractive than her younger stupid blonde roommate, Nicole? Kate hadn't always been the 105-pound petite thing she was today. Kate had grown up as an unpopular fat girl and hated every minute of it. After following her high school boyfriend (now her first ex) to this college, she had severed that toxic relationship a month into her Freshman year. Back then, it had been scary to leave him. She had been just over twice the size she was now and had felt incredibly self-conscious about her body. Seizing upon her independence, Kate had managed to lose 70 pounds her Freshman year, and then another 40 pounds her Sophomore year. She had met a handsome guy too, who wasn't weird like her first ex. She was finally starting to feel confident about herself, her body, everything. Yet Nicole happened, and everything seemed ruined.

Nicole.. what to do about Nicole? How did she ever get paired up with a roommate this terrible? One of the biggest minxs on campus, strutting her body around and turning heads left and right. Kate knew Nicole would be nothing without her body. At that thought, Kate's lips curled into a smile.
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FTMfatty 4 months
This story is fire ๐Ÿ”ฅ!

Take your time writing more. Just know there are fans who love it.

You're really gifted with dialogue and descriptions. 10/10 amazing writing talent.
ConJohn 1 month
Cheers! I've already got the outline ready to go for the rest of the story, and fully intend on getting back into it.
Limeicecream27 5 months
Nicole is going to be so mad when/ if she figures out what Kate is doing! This story is fire!!
ConJohn 5 months
Oh, definitely a question of when.
4funnow 6 months
Donโ€™t rush Her Humiliation
ConJohn 5 months
Yeah, it'll be the next project I wrap before returning to this.
Wafflel554 6 months
It's a great read, seeing if it's still going?
ConJohn 6 months
I'm going to pick this up as soon as I finish my current project. I already have more written, just need to edit.
Booty450 9 months
Is this still going
ConJohn 9 months
100%
Taking a break from writing to recharge, then will be back with more of this.
Tttfeeder 1 year
Awesome job my favourite story in a long time! Is the story finished here?
ConJohn 1 year
Nope! Far from finished. Gonna wrap up Haley's gain and then get back to this.
Mikeboi1994 1 year
Honestly blown away with this story! I tried making a story of my own but I don't think I have it in me. I love the progression and multiple perspectives. They make the experience more immersive. ๐Ÿ˜Š
ConJohn 1 year
Multiple perspectives are hard to do, so I don't blame you. Checked out your latest story and it's pretty interesting.
Scootergirl 1 year
How much do we reckon she weighs at this point?
ConJohn 1 year
Though Nicole avoiding stepping on a scale (for now).. if she did, she'd be somewhere between 155-160 pounds at this point in the story.
Clock 1 year
two chapters on the same night? nice.
ConJohn 1 year
Totally! I think from this point, If I have a multi-pov point of the story, I may end up posting all those POVs at the same time.
Ao01 1 year
really good story. But is Nicole still not aware of her weight gain? If so, that doesn't make much sense. Also, more descriptions of the changes in Nicole's body would make the story better.
ConJohn 1 year
Yeah, I'm leaning pretty hard on Nicole's lack of awareness/inelegance/introspection with this story. Agreed, but since a lot of the story is told from the POV of someone in denial, it's a choice.
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