Body snatcher

Chapter 4 - waking up is hard to do

I was in the room when she woke up. She quickly realized that she was tied down when she was unable to wipe the sleep out of her eyes. She thrashed around and screamed for help, but the ropes were on tight and there was no one in the house that could hear her.

From the shadows, I said, "Aw, does poor Chloe need some help?", in my thick Jersey accent. "I can help you. But first, you have to do something for me".

"Who the hell are you!? What do you want from me?", she shrieked.

"Oh, you don't recognize me Chloe?", I said walking out of the shadows and into the moonlight creeping through the window, giving her a clear look at me as her eyes bugged out in horror. "I'm you", I said in my masterfully perfected Chloe Hampton impression. "Or at least I will be. But for now, you can call me Chrissy".

This scared her even more than thinking that her doppelganger had kidnapped her. "Chrissy? But I though you were...! Please don't kill me! I'm so sorry I lied to the police! I was young! I'll give you whatever you want! Money? You can have all the money I have! Just don't kill me!" It was kind of sad, watching her beg like that. So pathetic. But then I remembered I hated her guts, so that sadness became pure bliss.

"I'm not gonna kill you. At least, not yet. And I don't want your money. Right now", I said pulling out the burger I'd been holding behind my back, "I just want you to eat this".

She looked confused. Like my master plan after all these years was to just feed her a cheeseburger. "Okay", she said with her head tilted.

"Fantastic! And here I was thinking I was gonna have to force feed you", I said happily before sitting down beside her. I took the burger out of its wrapping (a double quarter-pounder with cheese from McRoger's) and brought it to her lips. She fulfilled her end by taking a bite, juices and ketchup already spilling down her chin. "I hope you enjoyed that, because this will be the beginning of your new life", I said in the most saccharine voice I could muster, "You're gonna stay in this room and I'm gonna keep feeding you. I'm gonna feed you till you're full. Then feed you till you're stuffed. Then feed you till you're nice and fat. And if you ever even think about resisting", I moved in to whisper in her ear, "I will f*cking murder you".

She tried to respond, but I just forced the burger back into her mouth. I could see the horror on her face as I made her chew the greasy meat, tears welling up in her eyes. "Good girls don't talk with their mouths full. So you won't be doing much talking from now on. Cheer up, most people would kill to do nothing but lay in bed all day and eat yummy food until they're obese. You should be grateful really. I'm freeing you from a life of hard work and popularity. You don't have to worry about photo shoots or Twitter followers. All you have to worry about is how many burger you can fit into that tiny little belly of yours.", I said as she finished and I went to get two others from where I was sitting before. "Doesn't that sound like fun?"
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Comments

Kai512 9 months
I Hope you continue this! It’s incredible!!
Girlcrisis 7 years
Just gets better. Darkly funny and cruel. Kind of reminds me of Pretty Little Liars if it was filtered through some demented weight gain prism. Big Fat Liars?
Biddygal 7 years
yummy. more please?
Womansbellyl... 7 years
Keep going, it's getting interesting
Girlcrisis 7 years
Love this. Nice fresh take on the usual kidnapped and fattened stories.
Nok 7 years
Great premise, nice complexity, and love the potential relational dynamics, vengeful twin and manipulatable feeder in one big piece of creamy goodness.
Doggy375 8 years
I hope that she turns into a fat elephant or polar bear!
JM Ross 8 years
Yes. Well written. The first chapter works to stimulate interest. Keep up the good work. JM
Right 8 years
Yes, please!
Fatlilboy 8 years
Oh my......OMG.....Holy FAT!! Keep this going. It's an AMAZING start